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Please add that there is nothing bad in it. The way people use words make it sound wrong. Like - I was starting get suspicious of you. That makes it sound that being anything but straight is bad.. I didn't mind the sausage fest cause a lot of stories get detroyed whenever girls get involved.. I love things related to adventure and stuff. When I read something that is about adventure, I expect it to focus on it... I have seen hundreds of books that had good character development (that is really hard to find) becoming book revolving around how beautiful r hot the babes are, how their t*ts are hanging like fruits to be plucked. How their jade like skin and otherwordly beauty makes even the strongest man bed over his knees. I had enough of that crap. If people want to read about Romance or harem or whatever shit there is go find those specific books like - Handsome CEO and his secretary or whatever. Making every story a smut story because some teenagers can't get off from **** that is very easily available is such waste of imagination and creativity. I might be ranting but I just wanted to point it out cause every book i come across is the same old shit. I like this story cause here the character is someone i can relate to. He is trying to get stronger and is out to live his life as an adventure. The last chapter the girls got added and very first thing they do is make demands after demands and the mc being helpless as he tries to seek help from his crewmates. This scene, I have seen in a lot of books.. this easily goes to where the mc is weak and forgiving to girls just because they are girls. Anyway I am off. Ciao.
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I am done with this book...god.. I so hate the logic and the way of overly expressing everything in such novels ( mostly Chinese). Like - he was astounded and perplexed.. or her jade legs and busty body oh and don't forget to mention about her figure, maybe even height because even if u mentioned it thousand times it still is needed to be recounted. And for every little thing tht will happen there will be so much reaction.. like a bud has formed on a tree the reaction will be - he was so surprised and delighted.. again when the bud grows to flower- he was perplexed and amazed.. and what not.. these few chapters I have only been skimming through. I have been hating how he still acts like a good puppy for her ex lover and even was about to die once trying to save her. But she still gives him cold shoulder and he still keeps licking her boots.. then being a submissive and subservient to nearly prostrating himself before his parents and the ox.. he does jokes around but the way he behaves pisses me off.. still it was tolerable. Every mention of a beauty in every corner of the story with their celestial temperament, cold faces but beautiful as flower and what not gibberish.. yuck..I am gonna puke.. he becomes enraptured by womens beauty left and right..and every beauty MUST have either a good impression on him or something between the line.. . Then there was 4- 5 chapters on blind date that he was forced to go.. then there is his attitude that he will feed others around him his benefits and himself starve.. like he never took a single pine cone seeds.. one will undergo mutation at 4-5 seeds he could have eaten a few but no.. he is like- hey I know u. U r very nice. Take these seeds.. u will grow stronger.. and oh this was ur bow right. Though u gave this bow to me and I got to know that this bow is ancient and powerful, keep this, it will keep u safe.. and what not...damn these authors for making us build such expectations of seeing a cold mc who in the written world of war, selfishness and fight every corner will not focus on getting stronger but delve in his ass licking of his exes and people around him.. make ur characters in accordance to the world u build..
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