CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Posted

This is one of those good Ole fashioned slow burning romance novels. Nothing explicit (and by heavens, no rape either thankfully!) but oh so wonderfully binge worthy! This is a werewolf novel you'll want to turn into a TV show.

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Posted

Author created a new username because of technical issues. Look for Running Red by bizzaremidnight for a spectacular page turner!

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

what? are people with memory loss supposed to run around screaming? peace comes from acceptance. he probably accepted it because it literally hurts to remember

Bo Jiu never expected such a response ━ and she would never have expected anyone with memory lost to be so calm.

National School Prince Is A Girl

Teen · Warring Young Seven

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

at this point, it's just funny to spot the words vampire royal or vampire anything. it's used too often 🤣

His restraint and distinctive features with his white shirt half open lead to him looking like a royal vampire.

National School Prince Is A Girl

Teen · Warring Young Seven

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

The cameraman glanced at the skies: He didn't seem to have much confidence to deny that they were a gay program…

National School Prince Is A Girl

Teen · Warring Young Seven

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

with it being a half mask... what part of her face is burned? the mask covers her eyes and right cheek. does her mouth stick out? does part of her forehead stick out? 🤔

Yu Huang walked to the mirror and sized herself up in the glasses. She realized that the mask happened to cover her ugly right face and perfectly revealed her upturned nose and beautiful left cheek. She couldn't help but smile.

She Shocks The Whole World After Retirement

General · Emperor's Song

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

am I mixing stories? I thought her mom was a chef?

Yu Huang had lived in the post-apocalyptic era for more than 200 years. Her mother was the King of Mercenaries while her father was a scientific researcher. Yu Huang had learned powerful combat strength from her mother and also learned weapon design and manufacturing skills from her father.

She Shocks The Whole World After Retirement

General · Emperor's Song

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Posted

❗author seems to have abandoned the story at this point. I loved reading this story and I was excited to see where it would go. I waited and kept checking back regularly over the last 6+ months. it's been 10 months now, with no signs or messages from the author.

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Urban · erbier

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

that's a lot of books to be working on! It makes it perfect for a cameo of a character from one book to show up on purpose or accidentally in another book! like an Easter egg for your readers 😁

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Fantasy · Madsry

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

girl, bite your finger and leave a blood trail!

"I'm serious! I'm apart of the Wolfmen Pack that's near this forest! Not only are you trespassing, but They will come looking for me!"

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Fantasy · Madsry

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

how fast is she to outrun Derrick? how in the world was Derrick not right behind her? how did she not scream or fight back when slancord tossed her up and onto his shoulder?

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Fantasy · Madsry

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

shark fin soup is a prime example

Yu Huang clicked her tongue and sat down to reason with him. "Father, being short-sighted won't earn you any money. You have to look further ahead. Do you think that Imperial Cuisine Restaurant's dishes are really that delicious? It's all because His Majesty once came to the restaurant to eat. With prestige, even the most unpalatable dishes will become delicious."

She Shocks The Whole World After Retirement

General · Emperor's Song

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Posted

-English is probably not the authors first language. they would definitely benefit from an editor. currently the text is jarring with all of the typos- not misspelled words but the wrong words or word endings. - the chapters and story are average at chapter 3. nothing really stands out as unique other than the name Halora. essentially it just seems like popular copy and paste but the writing is more on the side of average than good. oh, and the FL seems to have a randomly selected phobia- there's probably a reason later, but at this point it feels randomly selected. - the only world building that's happened so far is descriptions of people's clothes which I don't think really matters since scenes and days change so quickly.

My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy

Teen · Maryixxx

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

that was a long 2 seconds 🤣

"Back off, weaklings!" He howled loudly and abruptly threw the ball into the air.

My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy

Teen · Maryixxx

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

lol, teenage moments 🤣

"No. I don't want to go anywhere with you! I'm tired of not being told what's actually going on! It's something my mother has done to me and I refuse to let you do it as well! I am so sick of being left in the dark so people can protect me!" She said walking out of the kitchen slamming the bedroom door shut locking the door.

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Fantasy · Madsry

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

aw, her mind went straight to babies! 🥰

"But I'm a human! And I've never heard of such a thing!" Sophia gasped pulling her hand away from his chest while her face showed utter shock. "Is it even possible for our two species to ….procreate?"

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Fantasy · Madsry

CHARz1e_Char

1yr

Commented

he starting kissing her vs he was starting to kiss her, perhaps?

In the present time, Sophia felt Derricks soft lips brush against hers softly for a mere moment. But quickly, he starting kissing her like she was his only source of water and he desperately needed a drink.