Webnovel Author: Netzach - Novel Collection

The writing quality was correct to me. Not exceptional, but not bad either. I've read many web novels where the author would write so badly that I had to use Grammarly to read his/her story correctly. In this story, corrections were minimal, but one thing was very tiring: "Shang this, Shang that, Shang this as well, Shang that as well..." Should I recommend you an aspirin before reading the first hundred chapters? I never understood whether it was the author's will or some beginner's mistakes, but I suppose it was the latter. The updates were good; nothing to say about that. The story development was decent. We start with nothing known and end with all the explanations needed to understand the whole thing. There was treachery, bond, and friendship. The character design was the main weakness of this novel to me. The MC was purely driven to destroy anything that he held dear for the mere sake of power (and destroying God), so, in the end, I found the Shang's character pretty poor and empty. It was obvious somewhere because he had discarded everything that made him "human". The world background was poor as well. No descriptions, no interactions with other kingdoms or villages. There were so many things to develop and so many things to discover in this world, but because of the pace (too fast to me), the author skipped a lot of things that would have made the WB much richer than it was. Another thing I missed was the MC's relationship. I would have liked more interactions between Shang and his friends. I deplore the lack of consistency between Shang & his "friends" and the lack of consideration towards them. Well, one thing was clear: the story has no interest in them because, in the end, they just disappear like nothing all along the story. Eventually, my evaluation is lukewarm. I wouldn't say it was a bad story, but it wasn't very good either. Many won't agree with my opinion, but who cares? I don't write to please them or not to please the author. (Author, if you read this, don't take my review to heart. I won't say you are a bad storyteller because I had fun reading this story, but that story won't remain in my heart either. Maybe your other story will have the opposite effect? Who knows?) Anyways, you should make your own opinion. If you have fun reading it, good for you. If not, well... bad for you? :D

I started this story recently, and I have to say it's pretty interesting. A God sent a mere mortal in an otherworld to mess with it and become the most powerful man in the world just because he was bored. It looks like any other isekai story, but I liked that the MC is a MMA fighter. Right now, I'm satisfied with what I read, but there is a serious issue in t his novel : "Alex this, Alex that, And Alex, But Alex..." Author, if you read this review, could you just rectify this stylistic advice of yours in your story? Because this is very tiring reading each sentence with his name. We know he is called Alex; why repeat it every time? Is it on purpose? Anyways, only this thing bothers me. The rest will be discovered all along my reading. Good work o/

After 85 chapters, it's my evaluation: Well, how should I explain...? This is the meta example: "Everything you shouldn't do in a story." It kinda reminds me of these fellow authors who, for the number's sake, keep fast posting but never tried to understand what they were writing. Where is the passion? Where is the love? Author, do you like your story? Do you like what you write? I'm sorry to ask you this because I'm also a writer and I know what it means to write, but even so, I'd like to find out why you don't put some effort into your writing. Moreover, apps exist to help you improve your skills; some are free, and others are to be paid. Well, it doesn't matter. The matter here is I'd like to evaluate your story, but I do not find any clues to make it. This is even sadder because the concept was interesting. I'll keep reading it because I want to know if your writing improves with time.

In the beginning, I wasn't expecting something great because of my few experiences with wuxia novels but I had to reconsider my POV after reading this story. Quickly, I've been immerged into the story & taken by it's pace. To be honest, I'm quite surprised by this novel and the overall quality of its plot, world building and characters. Firstly, the MC is somewhat 'Human' in his character. Said like this sounds funny but if you have already read others wuxia or asian novels, you should know what I mean. That very refreshing to read and each hour passed reading every chapter has been a bliss to me. Secondly, the deepness of the world-building is extraordinary because everything seems to fit. Cultivation is hard, yes and reading this story make you truly understand what it mean. Thirdly, I like stories where sexuality is depicted 'raw' without filters. Well, this is not what you think. What I mean is: everyone has its tastes and disgusts but wuxia stories tend to be Straight-oriented and rarely homosexuality is written (or for the fanservice sake only). Here, you have everything and there is no judgment. Fourth, women are respected, they have their own goal, their own wishes. They don't serve as dolls or foils for enlightening the MC and that's something to be noted. Eventually, if you wanna a good wuxia, read this one!