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it's good that you addressed the changes in his behavior. he was starting to act a bit out of normal. although launch did do a quick 180, may want to explain that or mc will keep thinking she trying to get him to lower his guard, unless that's what your having her do. probably the dragonball wish he mentioned though. just a thought though does he have to go back to where he entered the universe to exit or can he exit anywhere? i remember in sw he was on the planet that he first arrived on i think.

ooo interesting match ups. kinda worried for krillin though as you said tien is still the villain here. but at least we don't have to wait long for Carl to fight.

that would definitely work out. will need to account for how you want the universes to change with both the changes made by carl and without the characters. i also agree with bulma loving still being young while they have all gotten older.

thanks for the chapter. can't wait to see where you take the tournament and meeting the dragon crew. only issue with pod being taken isn't even an issue since in 12 years when after piccolo destroys it the remaining parts are used to make the ship to get goku to namek. there are at that time 2 more pods around raditz and nappa. but again 12 years so carl will probably be back to at least let bulma visit her parents and sister. also what is the time delay between worlds, does it change with coming back? i know star wars was basically 1 week marvel is 1 month sw. is it now 1:1 or still off? if still offset then sw is now over 4 years ahead. is db the same spent 2 months on namek so now 2 weeks marvel or is each universe going to be something different?

ya they were "together" for 15 years it was a straining point of the relationship. at least until Mister dark, broody, emo, whose family was killed, came along and she was basically i can fix him and show him love. just had the thought that must be where naruto got sasuke

you're right about that radar for some reason i was thinking they did it the old fashioned way. been awhile since i watched the original series. they are "dating" just yamcha left for the training. didn't really breakup or go on a break, just dbz characters being insensitive and leaving to go on a training trip that could last months or more without really saying much to their partners.

interesting time period. some things are not yet invented like the dragon radar or gravity chamber(bulma's). Bulma is currently dating Yamcha for 3 years (she is 19) however he spends most his time training and away from her. Goku is 15 but still looks like a kid. king piccolo hasn't attacked yet but will after the tournament. only real asset to get in this universe, now that he has a tablet of the tech, is materials and Bulma, most the rest of the cast are needed for the future of that universe. bulma's only need is for the universe was the dragon radar and a little tech stuff here and there. trunks can still come back since it is an alternate timeline, and being friends with goten so no majiin buu saga fusion.

thanks for the chapter. the wishes yes could be better but they would make him to op and potentially ruin the story. for tech universe, mass effect,star trek, but i would suggest star gate. he just needs to get his hands on a couple stargates or knowledge to build them(ancient database) also beam tech, weapons, shields, possibly engines. for abilities go anime for the most part. like go to one piece get a logia then go back to dbz wish for weakness removal. can get companion anywhere just make sure it seems real for why theny leave.

Thanks for the chapter. the cultivator style battle was great. i only have one complaint... ...the chapter ended. :(

love it! So many powers to claim. does the power come with weakness to sea too? Can't wait for more

honestly when i see some of those hate comments, they make me laugh. i love the story. when i see the notification for it I immediately start reading it. keep doing what your doing someone has always got to find the bare hint of negativity just to make themselves happy.