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Chapter 1: When The Sun Mutated

Strike The Sun!

Strike The Sun!

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The premise of the story is quite interesting, carrying a promise where the MC would travel across the lands and encounter various Classes or Character jobs. The downside here, if you may, is that somehow the situation the MC often gets into is a little too unfair that it could border into being unreasonable. Nonetheless, this kind of approach has a potential to be a good drive to move the story forward if done masterfully..
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I would suggest, if you may, that Troan's time with the other paladins should have been a little longer so that there is indeed an emotional attachement to these characters... But hey, good writing nonetheless..
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The title of the Chapter is "Celebrate" and they did so... but then, that escalated quickly...
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From wolves, to tigers, to Anacondas, to gargolyes...? That is quite a jam-packed area...
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From wolves, to tigers, to Anacondas, to gargolyes...? That is quite a jam-packed area...
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