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Mystery

2020-02-19 Joined Cameroon

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Second chance of a living son. Grateful to make things right. Lucky you

Some time had passed and Haru was now alone in a bed back at their house. He had come to understand the situation he was in. He just couldn't believe it. What was he supposed to do now? He had been reincarnated. And these people were now his parents.

The Legendary F Rank

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

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lol. I see your readers are obsessed with certain things. Anyway, every author is proud to see such. Funny memeories😅

"Yeah, I'm tired. Now if you would be ever so kind. Please take this to be cleaned. He took off the mask and handed it to the soldier. Long black hair fell out from underneath his mask. It was shoulder length and it looked like he hadn't slept for a few days with the dark circles beneath his eyes.

The Legendary F Rank

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

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Your describing is so good and direct to be your first book. You must be proud of yourself And the story is very intriguing. Can't get enough.

The darkness fluttered in the wind. It was a man. Dressed in all black. He had a long dark robe that was now stained red. There were drops of blood scattered across his clothes. But his facial expressions were hidden by the white mask he was wearing. It was all white but was now stained red as blood dripped down it. The only distinguishing feature was the number one written on the centre of his head.

The Legendary F Rank

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

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The third person, POV was the right choice. I can so much relate with the characters

"W-What is that!?" The behemoth of a man said as the figure grew closer and closer. It came closer and closer before suddenly stopping at the gate.

The Legendary F Rank

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

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I love your description. The start is just great!
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The Legendary F Rank

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

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Same here. I love your writing style and how you describe every passage

The streets were dark and empty, with nobody walking around at 2 AM, despite the refreshing coolness of the night, compared to the muggy summer day before, a small, slight breeze ruffling his hair every now and then. The occasional rumble of loud engines on the busy dual carriage way, not too far from Xiao Ying, was the only real noise in the area, that main road towering above him on a bridge quite a bit behind the sleepy neighbourhood he was walking down.

The Face Behind the System

The Face Behind the System

Eastern · SnowPenguin

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