SanTS

Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

SanTS

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This Robert is mcs slav.e not his ally nor someone of equal status. Slav.es are to obey their masters only, not question them. MC should not be required to explain anything to his sla.ve. Disappointed.

Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

SanTS

1yr

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Mike realized that Robert is crucial for him to get stronger now and simply chose to tell him the reason since no one can control Robert except him anyway so it's totally safe to do so.

SanTS

1yr

Commented

yeah genius, that's why you got betrayed by your "lover". Basic 3y old level mistake.

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Reincarnation of the Strongest Demon Emperor

Fantasy · Choka

SanTS

1yr

Commented

so, use all the money to buy formation flags? or use 30% to buy formation base?

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SanTS

1yr

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does*

"I come from a large town where these are common. This should be enough right?"

Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

SanTS

1yr

Commented

sigh what idiocy. a peasant is a peasant, no matter if he's from a large town or small village, there should be differences but not this big. MC while looking like a normal weak peasant have so much gold, if this behavior doesn't scream "I want to cause unnecessary trouble for myself" I don't know what is.

"I come from a large town where these are common. This should be enough right?"

Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

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1yr

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reread the 3rd chap, you did say Mcs father wasn't a mage, however you also mentioned his father to be stronger, so i would assume even if hes not comparable to peak apprentices, he would be quite strong. Not to mention being a noble, having capabilities to awaken apprentices and possessing a spell, His family is not totally ignorant of mages. So mcs country bumpkin like act, where he knows pretty much nothing about mages is quite illogical. its not like this a average magic novel where mc reincarnate in some playboy nobles, so they dont know anything about magic world.

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Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

SanTS

1yr

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Mc is part of a magus noble family, even if there is no official mage, there are possibly mid to peak apprentice mages but him acting like a complete country bumkin with no knowledge about mages is ridiculous. At the very least have some knowledge about the academy he's going, like the 'going to the academy in one month' part. like bruh. it would've been fine if he's just a mortal noble, but no he's from a magus family. The way Mc is acting is really unrealistic and ridiculous. The fact he's just simply thrown in the magus world, while being part of a magus family with no extra preparation or knowledge is just unreasonable. it just feels like Mc is a lucky commoner, not a member of magus noble family.

ch 0 5 Beast

Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

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1yr

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you could use it as a character Dev, and say make Mc say he made mistake in next chapters. But it does feel kinda useless, since he already got betrayed once and had plenty of time in the void to become the best version of himself, not to mention as a noble in a magic world he should've been educated.

"Ray, nice to meet you."

Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

SanTS

1yr

Commented

not much of a cautious Mc, huh

"Ray, nice to meet you."

Seeking Immortality in the Wizard World

Sci-fi · Radiant2

SanTS

1yr

Commented

what? if you are not in earth how you will call police?

"By the way, have you called the police?" a youth asked Liu Wen.

The Giant Who Travels Through the Martial Arts World

Fantasy · Aions

SanTS

1yr

Commented

Anyone would be blind to treat a 2.7 meter muscular giant like that, guess Chinese characters have that perk naturally.

There were several gangsters who noticed the figure of Li Feng, but didn't take him seriously and turned around and shouted: "Don't meddle in others' business! Get lost!"

The Giant Who Travels Through the Martial Arts World

Fantasy · Aions

"Y-yes master..." Nu Li said dazedly as he thought back to the sound of his master's voice. It was so pleasant and lovely to listen to. He spoke as if he was absent-minded and occupied with starting into Qing Fang's eyes almost lovingly...

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Eastern · PSYcho_72

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Now an existence similar to a cultivation beast with a strong bloodline as well as bloodline powers, Qing Fang came to relish purity. And seeing Nu Li's Fire Dragon bloodline stained with the weakness of a human bloodline, the smell itself made Qing Fang itch.

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