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This is pretty well written. I only noticed a few spelling errors here and there . The characters are interesting and none seem one dimensional. Similar vibes to my vampire system but with better pacing. Looking forward to more!

no problem at all. need more chapters ^_^

this is very well written the MC is nicely thought out. the other characters don't seem as good you me though. great work though REALLY eager to read more of this!

I really like the pacing of this. The MC is smart and lucky. but the luck doesn't feel like plot armour. I wish it updated more often and the side characters had a bit more feel to them. good job ^_^

It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.

This is very well written and thought out. The progress is slow however it feels right for this kind of story. I really enjoy the pacing of it. REALLY eager for more chapters keep it up author !

So far so good. It is well thought out and appears to have a good plot and idea in mind. It is nice that the other characters aren't bland or stupid. Personally I think the story is progressing.a bit to fast. Other than that slight issue it is pretty good. :)

it's why it didn't score a 5.

I rather like this. keep up the good work please! I hope you haven't dropped this. ^_^ please continue this . ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

what?! nooooooooo