Webnovel Author: Supremely_Innocent - Novel Collection

It’s not the worst book in the world, but nor is it the best book I’ve ever read. To be honest, the book is a bit tedious for me to read. It started out interesting, but then kept on reminding me of the other Beauty and the Beast: XOXO or something (I don’t really remember the name). Of course, I’m fine with that. However, getting into chapters 600+, I started getting tired. In fact, I was already getting tired at chapters 500+ but I kept on powering through to read since I don’t like to drop novels and whatnot. But sincerely, I feel like I keep on reading a repeat of plots over and over again. At the same time, there are so many new developments that I’m not even sure what the genre of this book is anymore. Aside from there being history and fantasy, there is also the addition of magic and spiritualism or something along those lines. Of course, I’m fine with that. It’s just… the damn author never really discusses any of those things beforehand. I remember reading a review that the world background is very undeveloped and pretty much invisible. Yes, I agree. The plot is also constantly at a standstill and goes incredibly slow. I feel that the author is producing a lot of fillers to satisfy deadlines or whatnot. Oh yeah, I’m dropping the book now after skipping some chapters cause it just got boring for me to read. And it’s not because I have no persistence or because there’s too many chapters. I’ve read Hidden Marriage which has 3000+ chapters and I only skipped the angst chapters that I could not deal with. I read every damn chapter aside from those angst cause I can’t deal with angst. But holy lord, this book only has half of that amount and I’m already tired. I think this is a book for people to read if you’ve got time to kill and there’s nothing else to do cause it’s boring to be honest.

I have dropped this novel due to my family situation and health issues. I apologize to all people who have been invested and investing in this novel. I would love to continue writing this novel and TFITP, but I just don't have the energy and inspiration to continue anymore. I am really sorry to all my readers and supporters.

Although there are only 6 chapters, this is a very good contemporary romance novel. Sarah is the main character and after dying from a bombing event, she transmigrates into a side novel character that she had previously been reading about a week before, Lydia. Lydia, the side novel character, is very weak and easy to bully - which is why all of the mansion servants do not respect her. However, once Sarah transmigrates into Lydia, she completely changes the original personality of Lydia - someone weak tempered and shy - into someone wild and brave. Now, Lydia's (Sarah) main goal is to get divorced thus she is showing a rude and bad-tempered side to the male lead. I think the male lead loves Lydia? To be honest, none of the actions in the 6 chapters show me anything about his love aside from him behaving very desperate when Lydia was about to die after being schemed against by her sister. The lowest rating that I gave this novel is for the writing quality. Despite everything else is okay, I think that there can be an improvement in the writing. Many of the sentences are cut short, making it hard to understand what is going on. At the same time, there are too many usages of commas when you could obviously just start a new sentence. *This is just a small complaint of mine: The chapters are very short and I hope they can get longer in the future. As an author myself, I know that trying to improve word count is pretty hard though, so good luck to you! **I think that this novel has a lot of potentials as time passes. However, for now, I'll wait for more chapters to be published before saying that this novel is an absolute artwork.

Because there is only 1 chapter, I won't give a low rating for the plot or anything. However, there could be some improvement in the writing quality. The synopsis could use more paragraphs/splitting. Not only that, chapter 1 - The Preamble could use some editing because the paragraphs look really strange. At the same time, the middle/ending of the chapter are just the lists of characters and these should go in the auxiliary chapters instead of the main chapters.