Webnovel Author: amarieheath - Novel Collection

Thank you for the review! 🥰 Glad to hear that in my first story with this kind of genre. I'll improve it in the next chapter 🙈 and thank you for your time to read this story, love youu~ 🥰

Hii~ I read your work and it has an interesting ideas. However, maybe when you typed a dialogue, you can use this symbol: "..." — For example: Evelyn yelled excitedly, "Woahhh!" You can also try to use a conflict to tell the readers about what happened. It will make the readers more comfortable to read your stories 🥰 Btw, please kindly check my work too from #WFP 20 called "The Last Chance I Could Live!" 🙈 I'll be waiting for your review, comment, and vote too 🧏‍♀️

Thank you so much for the review 😆 I'll work on the grammar thingy 🙃 so hard writing in english hhhh 😔

I just read the first chapter and it already made me laugh 😂 The story is in the MC POV and that's new for me, since every cultivation story usually used third POV. Goodluck! After 23rd Nov, maybe I could give you two stones 🙈

maybe, you can check my IG if you don't believe me through private message 😉 but it's really not my account.. I swear 😂 I don't even know how to do that bot things. Besides, it's not wrong right to ask my friends to support my story? Just.... I can't control them or force them to play the account. So, I couldn't do anything about it 🙃