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Commented I can't wait for the next chapter. They can't kill him now Konan is a fan of his work. Now all she has to do is read Konoha Love Story and she may want to stick around there for the next month waiting for updates.
ch 74 Chapter 74: Making Big News
I Become a Writer in Konoha
Anime & Comics · William777
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Commented Have Ino ask his to show what under his mask. And have him reply 'You will have to know me a lot better before you ask me to start removing clothing for you.' then turns to Hinata 'You on the other hand can look under my mask anytime you want. With those eyes you can look under all me cloths anytime you want, just keep the results to yourself.' Hinata turns beet red and passes out.
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Commented If You feel stuck on who to get next you can always spend a few chapters getting to know the girls he has now and raising their level of affection. He has a lot of D rank girls that he should spend some time with and 2 girls that are not even D rank. Throw in some dates or picnics for him to do with the girls, something non ninja related. Romance man romance!
ch 127 Chapitre 127: Naruto vs Gaara
Naruto : Harem System [FR]
Anime & Comics · Paladium
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Commented Maybe if she goes full body venom, it will get the rinnegan.
ch 0 2 A small timeskip
Naruto: Sakura's Symbiote [Rewrite]
Anime & Comics · PrincessThrone
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Replied to PrincessThrone There are enough Hashirama cells floating around the village to get a wood/blossom release. Mix that with the Uzamaki huge chakra pools, sturdy body and healing factor. If she keeps her chakra control and brains, you get a very foraminal ninja.
ch 0 2 I became Sakura's Symbiote
Naruto: Sakura's Symbiote [Rewrite]
Anime & Comics · PrincessThrone
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Commented I thought she would be at lease a C rank. It's not like this is the first time they interacted, you said she has been building feeling every time she saw him training with Garra and before. If he did just impregnate her, I would think she would be at B rank by the time she gives birth to his first kid.
ch 125 Chapitre 125: La tentation de Temari (+18)
Naruto : Harem System [FR]
Anime & Comics · Paladium
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Commented To max power XP grinding from reading: 1 ) make as many clones that you can that will last 8 hours. 2 ) give them all 2 books on a topic, like medical justus 3 ) Read book pass left, read book pass left until all of the books have been read by each clone. 4 ) dispel clones gain full xp time clones plus understanding times clones. I figure just rereading the same couple of books would get you less XP for every extra read but if it is new for each clone they each get full XP.
ch 23 Chapter 23
I am a what? Gamer?
Anime & Comics · DaoistKQnDFL
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Commented So ... Acme smack down? Step 1 ) Put something heavy into inventory. Step 2 ) Silent apparition to the tree branches above him. Step 3 ) Pull the heavy object out of inventory above his head. Step 4 ) Say "Beep Beep!" just before, or to be safe just after, it hits. Step 5 ) Put mess back into Inventory.
ch 20 Chapter 17
Harry Potter System Gamer
Movies · William777
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Commented missed a 0 at the end. he got 1000 ryo not 100
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
I am a what? Gamer?
Anime & Comics · DaoistKQnDFL
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Commented I was very against the whole Anbu route to avoid the Root route, then I looked at the cover pic and it shows him in an Anbu mask. I was like 'face palm' of course the author always planned for him to join Anbu, duh.
ch 48 Chapter no.48 Trial by Shadows?!
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
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Commented Honestly, I could never see Naruto in Anbu. Sure he is good enough to be in it, he simply refuses to follow orders. Remember, Naruto's most powerful skill is his talk-no-justu. I could never see Naruto going to assassinate someone, he is much more likely to turn them to his way of thinking and become allies then to simply kill them. Mind you I would easily stick him in the T&I department, he could get anyone telling their most guarded secrets to him.
ch 45 Chapter no.45 Interest from the Higher Ups
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
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Commented This reminds me of a flame war I had with someone. In Naruto he learns 1 skill from the scroll and only 1 skill. The guy I was arguing with swore up and down the 'Shadow Clone' and 'Mass Shadow Clone' were 2 completely different techniques. I argued that no they are the same, it all depends on how much chakra he put into it. I'm glad you explain exactly that.
ch 43 Chapter no.43 Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
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Commented I'm almost upset that the graduation is so soon. I was hoping that the teacher would teach Naruto tree walking or chakra nature or other stuff. You have him set the textbook on fire than not show what he teaches for the last week.
ch 39 Chapter no.39 Graduation Exam part 1
Naruto : The System Files
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
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Replied to Standy_Victorov I don't know about you but, being stuck in an illusion where you feel yourself being eaten alive, possibly from the inside out, by bugs would be a lot more traumatizing than being tired to a tree and stabbed again and again. The tree thing is what Itachi uses on Kakashi, and he was in hospital for a couple of months dealing with the mental trauma.
ch 28 Preliminary Battles Start
Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator
Anime & Comics · Fluffypie
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ch 202 Chapter 202
Harry's New Game Plus
Book&Literature · Kurogano