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Nice Fan Fiction but too long for what it wanted to tell. I really enjoyed the SoL parts, even if some manga might not publish them as they didn't have the right impact on the story. The final part is bad, since as mentioned I liked the SoL parts more. The story is over, which is an advantage of the book, as most of the fiction is dropped. I recommend the story despite all the final part, that ruins the whole book.

Sure a good fiction, but it also has a lot of boring chapters, too boring. However, I recommend reading the story, since there are not many good fictions.

A good story of a good MC. I recommend reading fiction to everyone, it's a great pastime. The story has no arc that makes the masterpiece scream, nor makes you want to read the next chapter, but it has no bad chapters either. Maintains a very static level after the first arc (not a bad thing).

The book is quite good and I recommend it, but after the "death" of the MC it got worse, and not a little. Of course, with hundreds, almost thousands of fairly good chapters, everything remains sufficient, but after a few chapters from the "death" of the MC you want to drop the book, it becomes really poor. Obviously to be read on another site.

Nice story, which I recommend reading. The story starts well and the relationships between the characters are well written. A chapter hasn't come out for a long time, but the author warned, so it doesn't decrease the vote too much (3 stars in Updates). The negative part of the story is that carried out in the Hueco Mundo, which without too many words is boring.

I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write. I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well. He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc. Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped? But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning. The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ... I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series: "Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot). This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand. Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist. The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere. The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life. In short, there are many errors of writing (not English). Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story). In short, I do not recommend the story. The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.

Finally finished reading. Foreword: I started reading this book thanks to "I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey", since it is one of my favorite stories and they told me that this book was practically the "father" and was very similar. I thank the author of this book, as probably without this story there would never have been "I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey". But now let's start that real review. The story starts well, simple, fun and good characters. When the world of the "game" started it continued to be excellent, but by the second access to the game, I started to lose interest. I don't like the fact that he used another character, making the monk useless (first character). However, the story remained pleasant, even if the customers of the library will become more and more useless and we could very well skip these chapters (the useless customers, those considered secondary characters). Normally when an MC op reveals itself after a long time, it is one of the coolest things to read / see. Reading about the reactions of the characters close to the protagonist and things like that is fantastic. But here is one of the ugliest things I've ever read. When he reveals himself for who he really is, it starts to turn into a bad story. MC who wants to have children with more women, reactions of the characters close to him (aunt) practically nothing, final written in a hurry and that does not close anything, in short, it is a shame. Despite the good amount of good chapters, I don't feel like recommending the book, as it is very disappointing.

Good story. The story is good until MC completely changes behavior at random (the reason is written, but the change is too big to accept). But this happens towards the end, a bad saga (the final saga) is not enough to make a story bad, since he has always entertained me. Let's say that i noticed the desire to finish everything quickly, when you could slowly change the behavior of the protagonist. Another negative thing is the "skills" that are created (always at random) from his Quirk.

It is not easy to evaluate ... Every day I like to read the new chapter, but before catching up I thought many times about the drop of the book (now that I'm on par with the story, there are good chapters and terrible chapters, but one chapter a day doesn't make me think about the drop). - The title of the story is not inherent with the tale. Only for the first few chapters is it inherent, then it loses all meaning. It was much better to think of better titles. No, it's not enough to say, "I'm a butler". - The protagonist feels too much emotion. Reading about a silent protagonist, flat and without expressions is certainly boring, I can understand the author, but then it was not necessary to write the story with this fact as a BASE. - Scenes like farewell to the first princess, or avoiding Kalya are forced dramas written in a terrible way. Same thing for some feelings of very forced princesses. Freya is okay, a girl who believes in destiny, but Iris? I'm sorry but it's poorly written. In short, I do not recommend the story because it is poorly written, but it is not even a trash can as many think.

I don't understand why they like this story. I don't hate MCs OP, on the contrary, I prefer them to the rest of the MCs. Here, however, it does not make an ounce of meaning. It's not real life, a different world, but an MMO, so passive skills completely destroy any basis for a good story. If there is a player who kills everyone while standing still and doesn't turn out to be a hacker, why would people keep playing? How can he be mistaken for an expert when he doesn't even make a move? Why hasn't the game closed yet? Translation or history (I don't know) stopped for a long time, better this way.

Good fiction, I recommend all KnB fans to read it. Only real problem is that it hasn't updated in a long time and still has a few chapters, so it won't take long to catch up.

I had already written a 5-star review, but the latest story arc is really poor. Characters with wrong names, useless chapters where nothing happens and things already said are repeated, a good thing happens but in the end it was a dream of a character ally of the protagonist, so that we readers no longer know if what we read is really happening. In short, the last part of the story is 2 stars, since it started well. The 4 stars is for the current rating of the entire book. I hope the story doesn't get worse, it was one of the books I was looking forward to reading every day, but this urge is passing. I know nothing new is going to happen, or if we're lucky, there will be a new piece of information or two on 3 chapters.