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The story over all is okay. The plot is somewhat above standard if you base it off similar stories. It has it's own unique points yet has a slightly sad finish. I was hoping for a better ending but it was anticlimactic.

This story is pretty decent, not overly cliche but it has some here and there. It's worth a read. I liked it and would read it again if the time comes. I can't say that about every book on here I've read though but this one is a bit refreshing.

As a story it's fun, a bit amusing at times, can be sometimes cliche but not overly. Some things do get semi predictable but not too badly. The writing quality is well done with few grammatical errors that I remember from most the story. Story development is good but not great. It's a good story and develops well enough. The characters are a bit diverse and have personality but in the end are kind of the stereotypical types too for some. The story had some dumb parts, some good parts, and even some points which got boring but that is what flashes it out too. The world background is okay, yet gets kind of "typical" for a cultivation novel and the main changes were based in a few ways but over all acceptable. Would I read it again if I didn't know it already yes I would. It's worth the read, that being said now that I know the story is it worthy of multiple reads through? I'm not so sure it is but it's not bad as well.