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Well, it is, rare to see a dio story, well Jojo story to tell truly... but I'm going closer and closer to dropping. DIO even without additional cheats, is OP, and defeated mostly for plot armor, so raising it's opness is decreasing my eagerness to read. And too much system, too less story.

OP, not OPEN. Sorry, auto editor.

Well... Good. Good! GOOD!!! Firstly, I really didn't want to read it - these near immortalities made we wary. But actually, it is magnificent! Try not to OPEN character and this story's brilliance will not fade. Ideas... Simple one - upgrading the bloodline, cultivators are able, and MC will be. Also simple, but with upgrade - devouring by shape shifting technique. Like - just eat it, or touch it or/and cover with Ki - and change the complex object(character+prey) into just character. It can be said that the devouring object is "inside" in some way, so remnants of making buu's ability should chew it.

I am looking forward for obstacles and repercussions. How MC will deal with and, more important, with what?

Cool! Thanks!

Good! I like it! Really like non human characters, and in dragon ball, especially Pilaf - it suuuper cool. Buuuut... How did MC in a non developed village created high tech? Solar panels? Motor? Seriously? You need a hell of simpler technologies working to create it.

A pity. Truly. Though waiting for your return.

Well... Not bad story, but text itself... well, lacks. And it is even for me - for whom English is not native. So, that's it. Just a bit of redaction, and a good fic will be born.