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are the gods just going to be creation and destruction and nothing different.............................................................................

dunno why but I get the fill of twilight reading this /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

it's not good or trash it's just okay but making him the son of fate dunno why I just find it stupid and cringe...........................................

wish little jack was the mc..............................................................................................................................

if i could i would change the review

am i the only one who hates seeing fireball in cultivation novel////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

do you still write this its been 7 months since the last update ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

read up to 10 chapters the only thing that annoys me the most is the word mana in martial arts novel hopefully, i won't see the word fireball next

i am a little b1tch because all the small stuff annoys the sh1t out of me like trying to merge Chinese and western culture together.......................

lol my spelling bad

if your like me who hates people putting like fire ball and magic spells in Chinese martial arts novels this aint for you just started and he got no real practice and he becomes strong he i know her found some stuff but come on her had no practice and he knows how to control it

lol i am a newb i just wrote this so someone can take the orphanage idea and make a better one like when he reaches a certain level you can get the system to level it up the building itself because it would be a light hearted novel idea