tatekim

7mth

Posted

Dropped at chap35. Nothing new for an HP fanfic, and there's no problem with that. The real issue is: - Short chapters - MC with no emotions - A strange concept of a 'villain' - The novel feels more like a summary The author has some good ideas, such as testing the plot. However, it's never developed further; it always feels like a summary.

Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

Movies · souryourer

tatekim

1yr

Commented

I would go with 10 here, i think its the only one that you cant lvl up naturally.

Luck: 7

tatekim

2yr

Commented

I love the interaction between then, but sometimes it feels weird, i don't know... each one of then always has something say, and i think this is a constant thru the whole novel, it doesn't feel natural to me.

"Maybe after you both geek out about the game she'll like you more." I say in a comforting voice, pity in my eyes and a pat on the shoulder.

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

tatekim

2yr

Commented

Is it just me or that whole "confession" in front of their friends was too awkward?

ch 63 Ch. 63 A Promise

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey

tatekim

2yr

Replied to MAIDENLESS

From what i read it was ok, not a genius with 300QI, but not an potato either. So for me intelligent is a good word.

tatekim

2yr

Replied to MAIDENLESS

I think Leylin is more indifferent then cruller, he's just cruel bc of the world he lives in, its a dog eat dog world, here is a soft world, and as a mentioned, "GOOD" boy.

tatekim

2yr

Posted

Probably the best novel I've read on this site! This novel is really something else... I've finished the 282chs in 4 days.. I loved the "status" in the end of every chapter! Keep the good work author!!

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

"Well, Master Potter there are numerous books being sold that feature you without your explicit permission, one series by a witch named J.K Rowling is so successful that it made millions in Galleon. There are also ads running that have your face, toys that in the likeness of you, your name being thrown around in countless products, numerous people impersonating, a whole chain that is about you, and that is only scratching the surface."

Wizard King

Book&Literature · Mark_Ward

tatekim

2yr

Replied to WealthyRaccoon

Its the first fanfic that a read with a mix of worlds.. But i was thinking about it, even on the MCU movies they didn't mix the history at first... that would be a mess, to much information, to much to explain... and they are from the same world, now imagine HP x MCU x WMW... think about the dump of information. Maybe he could throw something on the time skips, but too much would be a mess..

Magus of the Wizarding World

Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee

tatekim

2yr

Posted

A good read until now (chap 93). Its really Leylin on HP world, a power hunger GOOD boy. MC is intelligent and have the AI chip, so the growth of power is really smooth and simple. There's no romance tag, so do not expect that. There's almost no interaction or plot with his friends, which for me is really bad, the author just time skip where could be something. I'm not a big fan of HP, so for me the canon history don't change to much for a fanfic. Marvel is in there, but that's it. Recommended for fans of WMW, fans of HP not so much( probably will think is boring)...

Magus of the Wizarding World

Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee

tatekim

2yr

Replied to HalfStepImmortal

haha, what word could i'v used in this case? my engrishu is really limited! maybe common people right?

There were some taboo dual cultivation arts that allowed the practitioner to raise their ethereal strength through sexual intercourse.

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

tatekim

3yr

Replied to Earthshaker34

must be that, bc does not make any sense in trying to recruit him...

Triton sighed, "According to what I have been told about him, no amount of Rank 7 Pills can be comparable to Damien. He is our only and final hope. Within two years, our fate will be decided. Even I don't know how Damien can change our fate in two years. But I have no choice but to believe that he can, no matter how hopeless it seems. Besides, he doesn't seem to be the kind of person who is fond of dirty schemes. I think that he can be trusted and is not the kind of person who would betray unless we are his enemies."

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

tatekim

3yr

Replied to Resurgent

Yeah, but he could have run even before Igor showed up, i know that you needed this to develop the history, but the MC seems so smart, probing, making schemes, planing what he's doing... but out of the blue he decides to attack some sect disciples like that woudn't bring him problems. But anyway, loving the novel, thanks and keep the good work!

ch 53 Any Last Words?

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

tatekim

3yr

Commented

wtf just happen on those past chapters? mc was looking so smart and mature until now... he could just run, because not even an earth grade could catch him right? this was really necessary? im hoping that the novel dont go down like this..

ch 53 Any Last Words?

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

tatekim

3yr

Commented

i think shouldn't be seen like that, i mean, if we compare with drugs, using to health related problems is ok, using for recreation isnt. and they dont seens to have an predominant religion, that i think would impose some ideals like "*** is only a mean for reproduction". in a dog eat dog world wheres having *** makes you stronger, only dumb ones wouldnt practice dual cultivation. maybe they would even make dual cultivation a secret, imagine all the plebs getting stronger without restriction.

There were some taboo dual cultivation arts that allowed the practitioner to raise their ethereal strength through sexual intercourse.

Rise of The Anti God

Eastern · Resurgent

tatekim

3yr

Commented

This system getting life like is getting in my nerves.. soon will be like "Lvl up or ill die in 3 days!"

ch 45 Balance

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Fantasy · Adam_A

tatekim

3yr

Replied to WakelessMars

maybe, but i think it's about war, remember those elves? they need stronger people, and need fast...

Realizing that, Emery quickly fell into deep thoughts, as he dwelt on the motives and plans behind the method used in selecting acolytes in the Magus Academy.

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan

tatekim

3yr

Commented

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Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

tatekim

3yr

Replied to ikka

Wow, take it easy man, he's just a kid, not a super duper programmer..

He had a feeling that he was being watched but he couldn't pinpoint were the this cold gaze was coming from. Turning his head towards the rising sun he threw all useless thoughts that came into his mind and started riding his horse.

Wizard of Destiny

Fantasy · Archwriter

tatekim

3yr

Commented

lame

"His spirit is decent. It should be enough to activate the Necromantic magic array. Once the gate to deathlands open, I shall inherit the legacy of the Undead King!"

Wizard of Destiny

Fantasy · Archwriter

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