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I'm just gonna be nice with my ratings But this book is literally info-dump central hq Some dude just commented that the 100 chapters are slow coz the author is trying to give the readers some understanding My reply: I don't understand shit, I finally reached chapter 5 and I read the words strength multiplier, I'm pretty sure it was mentioned before, but I don't understand jack shit so yea, quitting at chapter 5 but yo if it's your cup of tea then have at it

past chapter 35 , the translator just takes a vacation, what is wrong with translators and names why is it so hard to just be consistent with names, I like Gurney Then some dumbass decided to turn all the names Chinese except the stones they couldn't find replacements for like Dylan Gurney became Gu ni, Gu nie, gu nl ,like it's two bloody names, that's just just his first name, he has a bloody surname when the translator feels like it combines again Gunie Guni Gunl , sometimes you forget to apostrophe certain conversations but you do it to others , you start sentences with small letters , names with small letters, I can't seem to connect with the story anymore, I'm tired of having to correct everything in my head in order to keep up so give up on chapter 43 sad really, it was a pretty good book (and yes I'm not starting my sentences with capital letters either, not using full stops and the like but I'm not getting paid to translate, now am I)

from Chapter 230, there's No point, I don't even know why the fuck you're still updating you're just copy pasting with new fucking titles wtf is wrong with are you demented or just retarded, if you have nothing to post them don't you

trying to copy , or at least your inspiration relies heavily on THE LEGENDARY MECHANIC But bro you fall short hard, there is no flow, shit just happens just coz it happens, fights are basically just damage numbers popping up, and conversations are actually longer than actual fights Tristan kept showing up like every other minute in the MCs fights just to say hi and then they treat it like an army setting when they were so laid back before All in all it is Boring af, and I tried, I really tried, the titles don't make it any better

this is some seriously dumb shit the fights are shite, I don't care about commentating, the fights had more words about the audience disregarding the MC than the actual fight, you keep pausing just to give that dumbass cinematic effect, it's a bloody book not a freakin film, you probably wrote all that just to hide that you can't write a freaking fight sequence to save your life plus what kinda dumbass MC just gets beat on and doesn't freakin retaliate, they attacked you, you tanked, then you just let them go, wow, just wow

,.........................the............. ..................MC.................... .................is..............,........... .,........retarded...,...............

the most mob mob character in history, what kind of dumbasses mock a 3 time champion for failing a fourth test where do they get the nerve to even speak, they're so weak yet still have some big ass mouths other than the MC and the chics , everyone else is Just a mob, and worse yet, yes he's growing but I don't feel any anticipation, your dialogue sucks eggs,

the book is ok shit tonne of grammar and spelling errors but I can overlook that, better than most, like a lot better but it's soooooo boring, goodness mercy, I have no idea where its going he's neither an edge lord or a chill lazy dude, he's somewhere in between , the annoying middle ground that literally gives you zero motivation

I came to comment for no other reason other than to cuss out either the author or translator Chinese novels have this weird habit of messing up the translations of the book halfway through the novel. THIS ISNT ANY DIFFERENT, To the translator responsible "S@#* YOU" THEN THERE'S THIS DUMBASS HABIT TO CHANGING NAMES EVERY FEW CHAPTERS HALWAY THROUGH THE BOOK,WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU, ARE YOU FREAKIN RETARDED OR SOMETHING How the fuck is it so hard to remember people's names, they bloody show up in every chapter and you keep changing back and forth thinking " I'm gonna mess with the readers a lil bit" To whoever is responsible for that shit, "F*"# YOU , EAT S#"* DI@#HEAD" OTHERWISE I LIKE THE BOOK

honestly I can't seem to get past the 3rd chapter there's nothing particularly wrong with it, the grammar and vocabulary are fine I just have no idea wtf you're talking about, your flow is shite, I know the words but I can't follow your thought process all in all this is just not for me

That has got to be the laziest title ever , it's Made even worse when you read the synopsis it's like he's not even trying I get the trend of writing the same genre but if all you did was read "the most generous master" and think, "I can do that too" , paraphrased some stuff added some stuff then passed it off as yours, then you like most others are a failure of a writer, for the record I haven't even started reading, and I don't think I will, still I'll give you a 3 just because, I'm pretty sure if I actually read it I'll give you a 1, hoping you see it as a 0

surprisingly not the worst thing I've read, still, I got to chapter 30 then realised I was lost, I have no idea what's happening or why or even how he's getting stronger, so I just quit

if there was an option for zero score I'd probably give it to this book, @author, you didn't write a book, you just put in a wishlist dumbass MC dumbass author dumbass world building(not that there was any to begin with ) the part that really killed me was the interaction with the girl, that MC mirrors just how retarded you are, you walk up to a girl you don't even know and say "don't slip in the shower" and somehow you expect her to thank you, worse yet you break her door and wonder to yourself why she locked, worse still you stick around after you "saved" her, to get a freakin thank you, like it's the most normal thing in the world. You're neither a pervert(a real one would just fuck her) nor a gentleman(a real one would call for help, you bloody know she's gonna slip anyway just call ahead of time ) dumbass

the dumbest book I've read on here, if you can even call it that, logic - doesn't apply common sense - doesn't apply 8th grade syndrome - a bit overkill delusional writer - he wasn't even trying

what is up with this bullshit world, are to you trying to tell me every other outlander goes through this much shit, everything is so bloody annoying , the characters, the stupid ass situations they find themselves in, a whole fucking king wants some random dude to prove himself worthy, there hasn't been a single interesting fight since I started, his cheat is just so disgustingly frustrating, it's just weak as hell, he literally gets stepped on by everyone, and the bloody horndog just goes with the flow, I lost every shred of empathy for any of the characters around chap 50, and I just skimmed my way to 150, up until now I still don't fucking understand how battlepower work, wtf is spiritual power, you literally just slap numbers on there and just assume "oh they're stronger" and when you wanna make them even stronger it's like "unable to quantify battlepower" You use a shit tonne of plot armour to get the MC past shitty, which you created using nonsensical trials which are just ridiculous, it doesn't inspire me or make me think " please hold on" I just end up thinking "wtf" He's already a elf blood monarch yet he's so freakin weak and I have to read thru chapters of his trauma of getting looked down on, with people actually looking down on him repeatedly, and always targetting his weakness for some reason Layla and even when he goes "don't touch her" sounds like background music coz he can't even do jack shit to help, that was a shitty 150 chapter, I just skipped the last sex scene with serene and fight with the king, only to find out he's about to be executed and there's bitch queen of the elves just standing there musing to herself, their attitude reminds me of those all powerful Mon gods I've come to hate in wuxia, and I hate these ones even more nothing makes sense, they just yap on about their bullshit plans and tests, with a title like blood monarch I thought he'd be op as hell, and maybe struggle almost die like a lot but grow continuously, not some lil bitch getting bounced around like virgin at a brothel Pardon the language but this book pissed me off too much

the most mob-like character in existence , Plus what is up with your currency, one minute, it's all gold , next you change the pricing to silver like it's perfectly normal, why, literally no conversion I made it to 13 chapters, I'm tired, I did my best Peace✌️ I'm out

ok I like the book, I don't even mind the Grammar mistakes but what is up with changing the name of character every other chapter you've called him, su ming, David, su mingji, and others and sometimes you be call the father wolf su Ming just for kicks... but I digress why just why do you call it alienation, wtf does that even mean, it's a long ass way to go than just saying mutation, and it doesnt even make sense, and for the record when predators hunt and go for the jugular the prey doesnt die immediately they struggle they twitch, heck even a chicken runs around for a lil bit when you cut off its head, last wolves don't roar, they howl, or growl or gnarl but they do not by any circumstance roar, that's usually big cats

this is a vrmmorpg , not a freakin mmorpg, stop using terms used in PvP or pve matches commonly found in those genre, please I'm begging you Also how in the hell is the first spell you get as a mage, heal, are you freakin mental my dude, no offense but unlike the freakin main character who knew where to get offensive spells, it'd take people hours to figure it out. I get you're trying to stand out, but at least try to make sense, Anyway chapter 6 and I'm out

are you freakin mental, how are the hell are they similar, the world building is so insufferable

the most annoying book ever, it's so painful just getting past the chapters it's keeps going round in circles, extending boring conflicts by entire tens of chapters