Webnovel Author: prettydimple

Correction: We kill the people who kidnap children, Miss Chae. We save the children from their kidnappers." His voice lowered as his mouth touched her ear. "There is such a difference."

prettydimple

9mth

Commented

Sorry to leave an unrelated comment but I would like to ask for the artist who did your cover?

ch 0 1 The Cursed Princess

prettydimple

9mth

Replied to Fredrick_Udele

Do you know people can tell it’s the author reviewing himself? Just curious

prettydimple

1yr

Commented

If would be better if you don’ include foreign phrases as your readers can’t understand what they are reading

"Tasie you remember when he was still crawling and how he played ball with Elo. Nna, rate umundia ji zi eto these days."

prettydimple

1yr

Replied to DaoistVPi6q1

Thx for reading this book to the end. I will certainly return with a second part in 2023. Please wait for it and don’ forget to leave a review. 🥰

ch 377 The end

prettydimple

1yr

Commented

I am not talented as a author myself but I just want to give you an advise. You need to stop writing for now and learn to use dialogue tags and punctuations. You are writing the dialogue with the descriptions causing the paragraphs to be too long and jumbled to the point where it is hard to understand what you are writing. If you go too far before anyone gives you this advise or before stopping and taking the time to actually learn writing format, it will be hard to correct the mistake when you realise then later. I am just advising you as a fellow author who started with no idea of how to properly write so please do not take this the wrong way. 😁

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

prettydimple

1yr

Commented

HIs character is of someone who wants to do something but is a coward. At times you can’t blame people like this 😫

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prettydimple

1yr

Commented

I am impressed

ch 0 1 Back to the Kingdom

prettydimple

1yr

Replied to Long_Star

Thanks for your review. Han Chen is living an happy life with his daughter knowing that Yu Yan has a chance to live. This is not the end of the story as I am working on the season 2, I split the story into two cos I don’t want it to be too long. So watch out.

prettydimple

2yr

Replied to Alcelinia

Your review you made my day that has just begun, it feels really good to know that someone spent so much time reading my novel to the end. Although I cannot promise that the part 2 will be happening early this year due to my final exams in June and the need to stockpile before publishing. I can assure you that I will do my best to publish it as soon as I can. Still please watch out fo my new work that will be getting published soon.

Don't wait for me at the altar today because I'm already on my way to meet the love of my life. It was fun fooling you around with Ken because he's not my distant cousin but the father of the child I'm carrying. You are too innocent for me, I need a wild and rough guy to handle me well especially his black huge c*** but...