Daoist994020

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10mth

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Overall, this is a good read in my opinion. The start of the story drew me in. The pacing is a bit off, suddenly speeding up and slowing down, though the word choice and grammar make it up for me. I see great potential in this story so I'll continue to read this story.

Daoist994020

1yr

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I am still waiting on the update

The truth is that I have been very busy in the last time, in addition to being up to date with the chapters that I have written. That is why I will put the novel on hold for about 12 or 13 days, I assure you that after that I will have at least 15 chapters to upload, I also do not want to leave you with nothing to have fun, so I will advance in the project I had in mind, which It already has 3 full chapters, while I finish reading Arc 4 and start 5, before finishing what is 6, I will dedicate myself to writing this novel. Besides that it will be in English so look forward to the novel.