Webnovel Author: Titaniumpig - Novel Collection

Titaniumpig

1yr

Replied to Daoist_Brownie

My point was mainly that it is a very easy theory to disprove, but to clarify, pure water is completely harmless.

"I temporarily don't have those things here, but I’ve got orange juice, pure water, coke, and milk, which one would you like?" Song Shuhang directly asked her to choose one. He was afraid that Soft Feather might ask him for 'Tonic Dragon Blood Tea’, ‘Phoenix Liquid’, or other terrible things.

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Urban · Legend of the Paladin

Titaniumpig

1yr

Commented

Author-san, will you be making a discord server for the novel?

ch 189 Sunny's Brilliant Emporium

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Titaniumpig

1yr

Commented

yet....

"She's not my girlfriend!"

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Titaniumpig

1yr

Commented

Author-san, I am slightly confused by the interplay between Rank and Class. Does Rank always trump Class or does a certain difference in Class overcome rank. For instance, is an Awakened Titan weaker or stronger than a Fallen Beast.

ch 185 Battle Master

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to KylarDrake

I am in agreement. This is some proper foreshadowing.

'Just you wait…' He thought as he raised his hand and was about to touch the door. Moments before his hand touched it, he thought about another name.

The Cryomancer's Path

Fantasy · Alphapanda

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to Alphapanda

In all fairness, you didn't really make it very clear what you meant. It would be better to say something like "Although the writing was too small for him to discern, for some reason he was still able to read the names regardless."

It must have been some type of spell, or just something the doors themselves provided.

The Cryomancer's Path

Fantasy · Alphapanda

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to KylarDrake

Drinking game: take a shot every time Panda shifts blame to someone else

ch 0 8 Gates

The Cryomancer's Path

Fantasy · Alphapanda

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to KylarDrake

We should publicize his dark past to the world.

ch 0 3 Bronze Fang

The Cryomancer's Path

Fantasy · Alphapanda

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to HopelesslyDepressd

This is just blatantly false. You can go out and buy pure, distilled water very easily. I am not sure exactly where on Earth you got an idea like this.

"I temporarily don't have those things here, but I’ve got orange juice, pure water, coke, and milk, which one would you like?" Song Shuhang directly asked her to choose one. He was afraid that Soft Feather might ask him for 'Tonic Dragon Blood Tea’, ‘Phoenix Liquid’, or other terrible things.

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Urban · Legend of the Paladin

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to Vandumbo

I hate to break this to you, but people curse when they get hurt lol

"Note taken, shit still hurts me, and it hurts like hell." Harry groaned out into the air as he made a mental note to keep avoiding anything that causes harm. Just for a little moment, just a little, he had thought that it wouldn't hurt like this with his new powers.

The Dragon of Marvel

Movies · Alphapanda

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to XXXXC

I use apostrophes e.g. "What the heck" is out loud and 'What the heck' is an internal thought. There are other methods though.

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Unraveling Despair

Urban · XXXXC

Titaniumpig

2yr

Posted

Pretty good so far. To be honest I would give this a perfect score if I were comparing it only to other Webnovels however I think it has the potential to stand as an actual book, and it that regard there are definite criticisms. That being said, this is only the beginning and the author is definitely improving so who knows what the future holds.

Unraveling Despair

Urban · XXXXC

Titaniumpig

2yr

Commented

This is an internal thought of the character. It should be indicated by some kind of quotation mark or italics (whichever you prefer)

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Unraveling Despair

Urban · XXXXC

Titaniumpig

2yr

Commented

Why did you switch to second person here? Generally speaking, perspective switches are only for large chunks of text that need to be in a different POV. Otherwise, you should stick to 1 all the time.

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Unraveling Despair

Urban · XXXXC

Titaniumpig

2yr

Commented

Is darkroom a compound noun here i.e. the room where you hang pictures to develop. If not, there needs to be a space.

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Unraveling Despair

Urban · XXXXC

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to MonolithWorld

there needs to be a comma after "after all" but you legitimately said in your earlier comment that commands could be followed by commas.....

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Gems of the Desert

Fantasy · Titaniumpig

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to MonolithWorld

Will fix the typo but as for indentation all of this is copy pasted from a google doc and from comparison I could tell it changed some stuff. Normally I don't indent at all as I find it rather annoying

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Gems of the Desert

Fantasy · Titaniumpig

Titaniumpig

2yr

Replied to MonolithWorld

kk. Second example is correct. The first is a bit iffy. More up to preference as "Wake up sweetheart" is a full sentence and it being its own sentence denotes that there is something of a pause in between the two sentences. A comma or semicolon might be acceptable as well tho

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Gems of the Desert

Fantasy · Titaniumpig

Titaniumpig

2yr

Posted

Hi, Author here. I have tried to make a proper fantasy book, somewhat in the vein of modern epic fantasy like Brandon Sanderson and Patrick Rothfuss. I obviously am still a long way off from those authors but I would like to think I am getting better and better over time. If you want a book that is focused more on character and world building as well as a slow rise to action and adventure then I think you could really get something out of this. In addition, my grammar and English are both very nearly flawless, especially after several rounds of editing to catch small errors so if you are looking for a book that isn't chock full of grammatical errors, you may have found it.

Gems of the Desert

Fantasy · Titaniumpig

Titaniumpig

2yr

Commented

Layla arc returning???

<It could be, but since we don't have a five-people group we can trust, we can only ignore it and hope we're not missing anything important. And besides, I don't like areas filled with water, so…> the Voice trailed of before getting back on track. <Whatever the truth might be, I think we should visit the temple first, before visiting the last area. When there's a proper order to things, especially stories, I like to follow it to see what the creator intended for us to see, instead of going against their will.>

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Fantasy · NakedApron

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