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Bonb_Crusher

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2020-05-22 Joined Global

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The man was a humanoid bunny. He was 2 meters tall, had pink fur, wore an eyepatch, and smoked a cigar. His rogue appearance, coupled with his frown and bulging muscles, made him stick out from the group.

Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown

Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown

Sci-fi · TheCringeGuy

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like him ?
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He set Elwin down onto a safe spot on the falcon's nest. Elwin tiptoed to peer his head above the wooden railing, his tangerine, cream-colored hair fluttering in the wind.

Aeternitas: The Shores of Destiny

Aeternitas: The Shores of Destiny

Fantasy · Toshinori_Heiichi

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See ? Another convenient , maybe some god of charm bless the MC ?

Without further ado, the owner reluctantly agreed to my terms, and I handed him the money. As he scurried away, I felt my laughter rising within me, unchecked and unhinged.

A World Unwritten

A World Unwritten

Fantasy · QTV

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It just feel forced , you cant vient him as your savior when your survival is due to luck and when they had à chance to win without this plan. And just why ? why doesn't he just escape with his team this plan was just to dangerous when you can just prepare à secret escape route

"But that leader wanted to claim my rewards, while these were innocent and fought following every order, even if it cost them their lives. For this, I won't kill them," Lucius explained as he opened the door of the shaman's house and closed it behind him. Deep down, he felt a bit of sorrow as he saw their faces, but on the other hand, he was also their savior.

Worldshift A New Beginning.

Worldshift A New Beginning.

Fantasy · Crown_Nyx

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now that I think about it , I was thinking maybe his sigil is too overpowered, but if he need 1 month for recover it's balanced

The Philosopher. Sounds like a Sigil for thinking and learning. It most certainly is not. But with how much Wyatt gets hurt, it definitely gets him thinking. Thinking about pain and suffering. Especially when the most potent ability from his Sigil basically cripples him for a month. It's already been around two weeks since he was initially hurt by that ability. I wonder how much longer it will take until he fully recovers.

Tread Lightly: Among Monsters And Men

Tread Lightly: Among Monsters And Men

Action · Broken_Saint

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Hope he learn something frome this

Billy shrugged, "Well, when things are too easy, they get boring. By acting dumb, I introduce an element of unpredictability, of chaos. It's far more exciting, don't you think?"

Anything but an Extra

Anything but an Extra

Action · IEatTurtles

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As a reader, i dont understand the point of making your MC undefeatable .If you can't lose what s the meaning of a fight or struggle ?

David watched the scene unfold from the sidelines, his mind churning. The arrogant attitude of Hotshot reminded him of the countless scenarios he had written where Enryu's peculiar ability came into play. The power of Adaptation, a skill that was borderline unfair. It allowed Enryu to grow stronger with each conflict, to learn and adapt from every hardship. The battles he lost only served to make him stronger for the next. It was an ability he'd designed specifically for his protagonist, making Enryu virtually unbeatable in the long run.

Anything but an Extra

Anything but an Extra

Action · IEatTurtles

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Love - Stamina of the host will increase and the Intelligence of the host will decrease dramatically.

Rebirth of the Ruined Noble

Rebirth of the Ruined Noble

Fantasy · Emberlight

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Your whole existence is a lie

"Me an AI?... Hah!" Alfin laughed, but the words that Lakyus said shook him to the very core. But then he recalled his past, the older life and his reincarnation. Which solidified his belief.

In the mind of an NPC

In the mind of an NPC

Fantasy · GoGo

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