adam_9531

6d

Posted

I got to rate this low because within the first 3 to 4 chapters the MC is stupid as well as the plot, he gets thrown into the world gets a light saber instantly loses it in a stupid way, to Jamie fucking lannister. After i read this chapter i had to have a break before I broke me phone reading it. maybe this just my preference, but I can't see anyone liking the plot, and seeing as this is a fan fic that's all the writer is doing, although I'll say the writing quality is ok. I can understand putting these to worlds together is a hard task but in my eyes it's gone in a completely wrong path to what it could, like; training with Starks, becoming king of the free folk, travelling to essos.

adam_9531

2mth

Replied to Baba_Yaga_

thank you, I thought I Was the only one who noticed this, I think the author has forgotten her, or MC has given up on her within a day or two, she probably dead or broken by now. Kinda ruins the plot for me.

ch 107 Chapter 106 "Another List To Cross"

Reincarnated as Draco's Twin To Dominate Hogwarts

Anime & Comics · Scaramousse

adam_9531

3mth

Posted

can't praise this fan fiction enough, wish there was more like it.

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

TV · Alittlepiggy33

adam_9531

3mth

Posted

really liked this novel till writer went crazy with ironborn, and for some reason need to add more r*pe to it, made me feel sick thinking that someone wrote this to get a point or feeling across to reader

adam_9531

4mth

Posted

I've notice the author is still active on we novel shame that hasn't been a regular upload

GOT : The Prince That Was Promised

TV · DaRk_AngeL

adam_9531

5mth

Commented

honestly this bit has gone on to long and I've skipped most of it, doesn't feel like there's any need for any of this

In that brief moment of relief, Firefly felt an immense wave of gratitude toward the Cleffa. She got to her feet, her body glowing as she prepared to unleash another Flamethrower on her disoriented foe. But in a horrific turn, Weavile, driven by vengeful fury, lunged at the retreating Cleffa, its claws finding their mark and skewering the small Pokemon without a shred of mercy.

Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

Book&Literature · Basso2142

adam_9531

5mth

Replied to ALEX1402

yeah this seems a bit much

In an instant, another Clefairy lay defeated. Weavile's blood drenched claws had found their mark, and the small pink body lay lifeless on the ground. The remaining Clefairies hesitated, their faces reflecting a blend of terror and hopelessness. They had lost too much to simply flee, and their resolve, though shaky, held them in place. Or maybe it was the fear, Emmet was not quite sure.

Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

Book&Literature · Basso2142

adam_9531

5mth

Replied to Bob_Uchiha_XD

completely agree with you, unfortunately I'm one of the people who absolutely dispies the use of unnecessary scene where characters are r*ped, assaulted for a impact on the writer when it's uneeded.The is a fan fic people know game of throne is ruthless, my opinion no one has to agree.but it makes me feel physically sick.

The Revolution of Westeros

Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir

adam_9531

5mth

Replied to Zbara_1577

excellent writing yes, but things in the plot good have been handle better

The Revolution of Westeros

Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir

adam_9531

5mth

Posted

the rating system of this app is annoying because the author does good work, just don't like it when writers have write horrible scenes to get reactions

The Revolution of Westeros

Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir

adam_9531

5mth

Commented

was enjoying the novel till now, there are other extremes writers can take, not making the readers sick and discucted from reading things like this.

"Not that kind of hunger," Steffon Baratheon chuckled.

The Revolution of Westeros

Book&Literature · Eden_of_Kovir

adam_9531

5mth

Commented

hope MC just kills him in the next page or sooner

"My lady, as the days come to pass your beauty only elevates further." The Master of Coin added quite charmingly.

GOT/ASOIAF: A Game of Ice and Fire

TV · Daichi_TBR193

adam_9531

5mth

Commented

i don't like some of these changes, doesn't fit the characters well I think, either way puts me off this novel.

"Identify yourself," Robb Stark growled, blanket slipping down his torso - bare due to the temperatures in the south. Fingers shaking, Margaery managed to complete the task of lowering the hood of her cloak. Hard eyes widened in surprise. The knife lowered. "Queen Margaery, what are…?" Suddenly self-conscious, Robb covered his torso with the thin blanket.

An Empire of Ice and Fire

TV · rhcharan

adam_9531

5mth

Commented

honestly this is really annoying, just kill all the ironborns and be done with itshould have done it in the first place

|Euron Greyjoy - High Admiral of the Iron Throne and Lord Commander of the Iron Fleet|

Silver Prince

Book&Literature · Fangrove

adam_9531

8mth

Commented

just kill superman already this so annoying

"That's enough, Black Bolt," Batman said, stepping out of the portal. "He's already defeated."

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

adam_9531

11mth

Commented

you basically ruin the whole premise of the starting plot line he has nothing none cares about him and he's left to dieing, but I'll get strong and all that. but now random character comes into his life and he accepts like nothings happen, personally I would stay away and ignore anyone with previous relations. might drop this one

ch 0 3 Chapter 3

Marvel : Different Peter Parker

Movies · INSANE_GAMER

adam_9531

11mth

Commented

main point in writing a story is to make it enjoyable, and I understand sometimes there down and up in them but when it's not needed or pointless it really annoys me. I guess this is a easy way for the author to say MC isn't going to rush to the top and have easy, at least make it realistic, fun and interesting

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Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

adam_9531

11mth

Commented

that was lame

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Pokemon - A real story

Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince

adam_9531

1yr

Posted

really like this story and the MC, but reading on I might have to drop this, can't keep ready knowing Daenerys went through the same thing like in cannon, while MC has his magic and influence to help easily apperate in and out, done

Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms

Book&Literature · ElderKwon

adam_9531

1yr

Commented

not sure about this skip a part of me wanted to drop this story, think it ruins the indepth feeling

'It's been a long long two years since I woke up to this new life and finally, it's time to, as they say, step into the action proper.' I think as I watch Professor Snape rush into the hole under the Whomping Willow.

HP: Werewolf? I prefer Worgen

Book&Literature · 0DarkWolf0

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