Mr_CookaTater9406

10mth

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everything good? You haven't updated in a while and those of us that have been enjoying are getting concerned.

ch 909 Chapter 909 Victors

Mr_CookaTater9406

1yr

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I really appreciate the story so far. The relationships feel natural and power progression of characters are entertaining but not campy. Here's to a bright future to the wedded couple and the continuation of this great work.

ch 783 Chapter 783 Marcus and Mrazivý’s Wedding

Mr_CookaTater9406

1yr

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Good chapter. One thing of note: Entrées are the centerpiece of a meal typically consisting of meat, while an Entries are written words put into a continuously updated book.

ch 184 Another Mess

Mr_CookaTater9406

1yr

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Hey there, hope you are doing well. I believe emphasize here should be empathize.

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Mr_CookaTater9406

1yr

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Lemme guess. He still needs to accept his humanity, right? Even before he started showing signs of being a beast, he viewed himself as a monster in a human world.

"Wait. How do you know in such detail what's happening to me and should I expect another bottleneck for the bright violet?" Lith pushed Salaark away abruptly to stare her in the eyes.

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Another good chapter can't wait for the next!

ch 103 A Contracted Battle

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Another good chapter! And Happy New Year, mate.

ch 93 Lingering Trails Of Harbored Feelings

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Ah.. a slower chapter that shows Ergillaz cares, touching. :)

ch 92 Consequences Of a Busy Day

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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And the plot thickens further. Can't wait to see how this develops!

ch 91 Experimentation Brought For Preparation

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Yet another riveting chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

ch 90 Treyah And Ergillaz

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Another good chapter, mate, just wish I saw you uploading more often... but que sera sera.

ch 89 Calming The Mad

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Good chapter. Small side note, the word you used here "wander" should be "wonder." I love the word wander it is fun to use in conversation but it means to walk aimlessly so I rarely get to use it.

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Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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Excellent chapter. If I might hazard a guess for the future, the MC's ability to absorb souls and utilize them will prove above average and it is all thanks to the forging of his own soul in the long dark he endured before reaching the city. He knows who and what he is, or at least the most pure bits left. side note: In this chapter you used the phrase "veil swipe," but I think you might have meant "fell strike" since fell has been archaically used to mean extremely evil, ferocious or deadly.

ch 79 Risk And Result

Mr_CookaTater9406

2yr

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You all good? Been a while since you updated and, with how much I have enjoyed your story so far, wanted verify your well being.

ch 78 Amidst The Carcasses

So I have noticed your use of Igor rather frequently. Is this an intentional choice or a grammatical error where you intend to use the word Ichor? Or i am completely off base, which is totally normal.