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Moonlight_Fire

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2020-05-25 Joined France

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Congrats ! Your raised spoiled kids 😒 Can't wait to have her put back in her place thanks to the Greville twins 😌

Jen and Jacob were given a lot of attention in Mage Association, so having that attention taken from her didn't make her too happy.

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Fantasy · Raos_IOI

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Well... Messing with Asher would incur a lot more than a minor issue... 😅😅

However, she knew that Lishia was formidable in her own right and would likely be fine handling minor issues.

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Fantasy · Raos_IOI

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Alyssa, not Amelia.

Midway through her explanation, Elsa directed her gaze to where Asher, Amelia, and Venessa were seated.

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

Fantasy · Raos_IOI

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Edit : "Adeline"

Adelie rested her elbow on the bed, propping herself up. She stared at Caesar's face for a few moments and extended her hand out to cup his cheek in her palm.

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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Edit : "her legs" ?

Caesar pulled his legs apart to give way to himself and continued his manipulation of her body as his finger moved at a good pace inside of her.

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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Edit : did you mean "not used to" ?

"I have to return the money," Ari muttered, there was no way she could keep this million dollars from Nicolai. Even though he denied wanting anything in return, Ari was used to taking the kindness of people for nothing.

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Urban · fairytail72

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Edit : "all there was,..." no comma after "all"

If that had been all, there was, Ari would have thrown the memory in the back of her head and be done with it. Who did not have a bad memory after getting drunk? Instead, she ended up asking Nicolai De Luca whether he wanted to sleep with her in exchange for the million dollars that he gave to her.

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Urban · fairytail72

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Edit : the "that too" is weird

"That's not possible," Nicolai refused at once, he did not believe in love, nor will he ever fall in love. His parents fell into that dumb trap and look where it brought them. His father fell out of love and married another much better woman as he always insisted that too during his marriage with his mother.

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Urban · fairytail72

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Edit : put the comma before "but Nico..."

While Inez was left broken-hearted and alone to raise a kid by herself. She did a wonderful job but Nicolai, soon learned that there was no point in trusting that stupid thing called love.

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Urban · fairytail72

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Edit "out of his head"

"This friend of mine met with a woman, and he found her amusing. Just amusing … Nothing more, nothing less. But now the thing is that he cannot get this woman out of her head, it's terrible."

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Escaped My Ex, Got Snatched by His Rival

Urban · fairytail72

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Edit : "she's still with me"

"Even as she isn't saying a word to me right now, I don't mind at all. I can stand it, I can endure it, and I can take the torture and pain that comes with it. I'm just glad she's still me and that I haven't lost her. I don't want to."

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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Edit : "In love"

"Inlove…?" Caesar was drawing invisible circles on the counter, deep in thought. "I can't really tell, Nikolai. I don't understand what it's like to be in love with someone, so I can't even tell if I do or not."

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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Moonlight_Fire
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I don't know if it's because I read a lot of violent novels, but I find Caesar really soft. I would understand more the "you betray me, you die" personality for him 🤔

"Shhh," Caesar hushed her. "I don't hate you, Diana. But you're wasting your time if you think I could ever be with you. No, I can't and never will. Adeline is all I want—nobody else. She is all I care about, no one else. So leave."

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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Leave them alone 😡 Grrrr 🐺

"Arkadi!" Mr. Sergey whipped his attention to him. "Take a few men like yourself, apprehend that human, and take her to the warehouse. As for Caesar, I'll deal with him myself."

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

Moonlight_Fire
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Edit : "be it" -> "but"?

The sound of the chair breaking apart as he threw it against the wall resounded, startling Arkadi. He took steps back, wanting to keep himself safe, be it the alpha loses his cool.

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha

Fantasy · PeachBunBun

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