Patrick_Fultz - Profile

I like the amount of thought the author (i think it a man so I'm going to use he sorry if I'm mistaken) there is some points where the information seems redundant but at the same time it allows the reader to visualize the world a little better like as example (how goblin have a decent amount of intellect more so then most would assume or how mana looks and flows thro the world) these little things that seems like useless information for a good reader makes it like night and day since I'm in chapter 210 something and I'm still using things in the first 10 chapters to help visualize so great work but story development I'm on edge of it like a book it to slow but if it supposedly to like a novel or series it's a great speed (I love it but I see how others won't so it choosing ur readers) ** I love the series and I would appreciate a little cuddle screen between Ark and the female (forgot the spelling) I do mean wholesome snuggle

hey author u are good at writing and I hope u continue. I'm very interested in where you will end up. I haven't read much yet though so I cant give u constructive criticism to help u. plus people who is straight up toxic in there criticism are not worth following it because a lot of the time they didn't even read it and because of ur bio here is a lot of love (hugs u tightly and kisses ur cheek with lots of cuddles)

hey I love the book it has a great contrast of story and ;) stuff and don't underrate yourself it might be your first novel of this stuff but even so its really good.