Badges 7
Moments 162
1yr
Commented Oversee an event the system could manage...
Missing punctuation
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented suddenly, a Golden, floating door...
I don't think you need a comma in Golden,<
right?
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented and right now, he did not want to miss this opportunity >>> and right now he didn't want to miss this opportunity
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Replied to lifesketcher That's great!. Also sorry, I realized that I sounded a bit rude there
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented Or else me writing here is useless
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented I hope the author reads comments
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented Also the choice of the mc is too sudden and a little illogical making it feel forced
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented "He MUST hire... "I've seen this happening a mile away. Author the plot is too predictable which ruins my experience and everybody else
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented Again he's not asking
"Wait, what? I lost a level? Damn it. System home page." I asked.
Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World
Fantasy · jdbeue
1yr
Commented That's not asking
"Use the memory skill on this skill book, Kun Peng Myriad Transformations." I asked.
Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World
Fantasy · jdbeue
1yr
Commented Can we stop the "twitching lip" thing? its getting waaay to repetitive
Lex's lips twitched once again at the heavy criticism, but he had come to expect it now. Why was the system so much more annoying than Mary? She was so cute and adorable, the system should be more like her.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Commented In your- missing word
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
1yr
Replied to as_ss Come on mate, it's a joke
The Small Shop
I Became a Pawn Shop Owner
Urban · Heavenly_Daoist_06
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher