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OK so this is like the 100th novel I've started reading ... getting the gist here First 20+ chapters will have loads of explanation about this and that🤷‍♀️ Once you need to part with coins the chapters become shorter when the novel gets exiting , or you become hooked , chapters prices get a little more expensive 🤔 before you know it your throwing what little pocket money you have to get the next ten chapter's 🤔 . theses novels never end so myself has come to conclusion that the author comes up with a good blurb and webnovel writers take over at some point. why else than to make more money 🤷‍♀️. there are more characters in these novels than all bibles combined. I'm not religious, though I've read a few.

this is kind of similar to another book exception being grammar is better and it is an🦉 instead of a fox

copy and paste last page of previous chapter to current chapter ugh 😑

OK so maybe the system thing is good and all but like it 6+ pages of most chapters. personally I don't even read the stats all that often. maybe if you just included new stats that she has gained. every now and then have a chapter representing all of her stats. the way this novel is going her stat page is gona cost 30 credits. it's not really a story more of an encyclopedia of what skills and bloodlines and blessings. the story is great just being bitchy

Um 🤔 why can't I use fast passes on this.

Reading novels that have bad grammar is a skill in itself 😊

Immediately disappointed 😥. Free chapters in this novel are between 19-24 pages on android The chapters I'm paying an extortion price for are only 12-15 pages on android 🤔 The story is exiting and has plenty good to say about the quality of Just don't think I'll be funding it as 500 gold coins isn't enough for 40 chapters ! The novel already has +1000 chapters. £8.99 500 coins, £18.99 1000 coins to unlock all remaining chapters costs a staggering 9,700 coins that's like £160+ *who has that kind of money for a novel. It's not like after I read this I'll get a stamp on my CV and be approved as an upstanding citizen .I have payed less for a decade subscription to Spotify which at least improved my mental health. This is like gambling. So in hindsight I apologise to the author for my ignorance as I have a life to live and the cost of living has drastically increased with price of food ,gas, petrol /diesel .i commend anyone that can afford to read this novel. For the same price you could get a reasonable holiday away with spouse. Or eat at a fancy hotel and even have enough money left over for a few drinks. 🙄

Short chapters 🤔

That happens alot on WN, thankfully I'm a little behind so I'll probably be sad in a few days from now

Chapte: 205-208

This chapter is da best. Giving me a sense of how " OP! ! They are as cultivators compared others similar age group. I hope there are mores chapters in this way as I continue you enjoy the authors quirks. Maria and cellian are in whole other league of strength AND " POWER!,!! 😅

Maria and Mira.. Few times the names have been mixed up during these trial chapters. Also pronouns have been wrong a few times in earlier chapters. Getting he and she, her and him in wrong places . The story is good so far. I just find that without mistakes it would be more enjoyable.

? Why only 1 page? ? Like literally 1 page 🤔. 🙄 Is web novel broken chapter analysis.

Y is the last paragraph of ever chapter the first in the following? Other than that brilliant story so far

To the writer. I'm enjoying this read .at start I thought it was some what similar to so That time I got reincarnated as a spider Anime crunchyroll ! Though it's some what different with the Gods! My only pickle not real problems is that the chapters that I've paid for are cut short with writer asking support through other forms. Still though up to this stage the chapters are actual chapter and not just a few paragraphs ,which I am thankful for.

Cultivate kill repeat

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I'm lost really lost

To the writer The story is well composed and with little to 0 mistakes . It's easy to read , easy to follow and easy to comprehend... But why has ever chapter end with ( if you are reading this and not Web novel) ... Yeah I understand dropping in now and again but it is killing the flow . Please continue this story though as I am enjoying it thanks