cbwolf99

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a lot of paragraphs have been repeated multiple times over and over again in this chapter

ch 139 Chapter 138

My Items Have an Upgrade Panel

Sci-fi · Wolfberry is not Tasty

cbwolf99

7mth

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it's not a dwarf galaxy it's a super galaxy

"Our analysis of signals and emissions that have radiated from Messier 87 reveals that there is a high prevalence of hyper materials in this supergalaxy." A male material scientist explained. "We have attempted to model the local environment at different galactic coordinates to predict how the presence of so many hypers would affect planets and star systems. The results range from minor, localized disruptions to extreme deviations in the laws of physics. We do not possess enough reliable data to narrow this range. The conditions also undergo massive shifts depending on whether we are studying a star system at the outer edge or close to the center of the dwarf galaxy."

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

cbwolf99

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big and vast is what I think you meant

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The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

cbwolf99

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his daughter not her daughter

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The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

cbwolf99

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get a leg out not get a let out

Streaks of light and explosions lit the sky as the two sides engaged, and Max spun Cleansing Light to get a let out and intercept a close passing fighter, knocking it off course when his foot met the shields and making the entire volley from its main weapons fly wide.

Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku

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off her not his

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The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

cbwolf99

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not only returned

The Dawn Star Project not returned Ves to the basics, but also reminded him of the times where he worked on his mechs by himself.

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

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could only not only could only

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The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

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from her head

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The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

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how his mother not her

Ves could not imagine how her mother could even do that! The way that she was able to command the space around them with such ease showed that she could easily grant the Oblivion Empire massive terrain advantages in the Nyxian Gap!