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o thanks didn't know it just said the end so I assumed that it was the end

this is amazing and should be considered as a diamond in the rough. it has great development of the main character and has good on and off action life and explanation balance so it seems like you're doing everything with him.

eh this doesn't actually address how or if he solved the problem presented at the beginning of the comic and really leaves that to be desired

this need to actually show him getting his revenge in the end it's a bit of a let down.there is slot of development of the characters but the ending seems just a little too abrupt.

like how the system needs to update again and get more stats with it than jus mental strength and vitality

this is a great story for people to get into every thing revolves around money in almost every world and this comic shows that better than most do. it has a good power complex but some things in it can use some work befor it is completly finished.