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Just a guy who loves evil mcs with a drizzle of romance.

2020-06-19 Joined United States

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There are a few things you should know about online. One of the big things is the similarities to the show Mushoku tensei. Most of the stuff that it shares is only surface level things, and it is also only in the beginning of the story. After the first ark, more or less, Online starts to pave it’s own way, becoming it’s own story. The characters were the opposite of what I expected. I assumed they were going to lean more into having npc types of behavior. I was unmistakably wrong about this assumption which is ironic considering the fact that this is a vr story. Even up to the current chapters I’m sharing the thoughts of the main character. Is it actually real or is it just a game? Thoughts like these keep me on the edge of my seat whilst reading Online. The world building is simply phenomenal, which is a trend in Delz’s work. Every thing is described in vivid detail while at the same time not going overboard( this could sometimes halt the reading process)(for me at least). The pacing is slow, but stable and the whole story itself appears to be a slow burn. Last, but not least the action scenes. The fights and anything related to action is very detailed. After reading the action, visualizing it using my imagination is super simple. Another thing I like is how the fighting styles and magic in Online kind of reflect the characters utilizing them. I can definitely say that no part of the novel so far has been boring or lackluster. I’m amazed at how good it’s been so far and I’m ready to see how it progresses in the future
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Sprouting from unseen space behind him, a thousand, golden arms stretched out in colossal glory, overshadowing the jungle in which the knight inhabited. The boundless array of gilded arms filled the abyssal skies with a divine radiance, shining through the clear raindrops. 

Garden of the Abyss

Garden of the Abyss

Fantasy · DelzGB

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She was far too close–much, much too close for the virgin-recluse to handle as his cheeks became red, averting his gaze.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

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Through the billow of embers, the greatsword wielded by the colossal of black-steel armor swung through, aiming towards the claymore-wielding woman who stood with her back turned towards it.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

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In his hand, he formed a temporary weapon made of reshaped, dark flames that took the form of an unstable, hissing sword in his grip.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

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Crap, what am I doing…? He questioned himself.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

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Could be a man with a very femine voice
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For some reason, that thought supplied him with some much needed motivation. As the blood rushed through his body warmly with such thoughts, a system notification appeared.

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Fantasy · DelzGB

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