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Have you ever had intrusive thoughts? If so, this novel are those given life. Explosions, Magnificents fights, and a bunch of other dark things. It also has it's a decent amount of hilarious moments. Let’s not forget the vivid description and phenomenal world building. The main character, Noah is also a chad. Honestly, what more could you want from a novel of this genre? The answer to that is simply nothing. Why? Because it doesn't get better than this.

There are a few things you should know about online. One of the big things is the similarities to the show Mushoku tensei. Most of the stuff that it shares is only surface level things, and it is also only in the beginning of the story. After the first ark, more or less, Online starts to pave it’s own way, becoming it’s own story. The characters were the opposite of what I expected. I assumed they were going to lean more into having npc types of behavior. I was unmistakably wrong about this assumption which is ironic considering the fact that this is a vr story. Even up to the current chapters I’m sharing the thoughts of the main character. Is it actually real or is it just a game? Thoughts like these keep me on the edge of my seat whilst reading Online. The world building is simply phenomenal, which is a trend in Delz’s work. Every thing is described in vivid detail while at the same time not going overboard( this could sometimes halt the reading process)(for me at least). The pacing is slow, but stable and the whole story itself appears to be a slow burn. Last, but not least the action scenes. The fights and anything related to action is very detailed. After reading the action, visualizing it using my imagination is super simple. Another thing I like is how the fighting styles and magic in Online kind of reflect the characters utilizing them. I can definitely say that no part of the novel so far has been boring or lackluster. I’m amazed at how good it’s been so far and I’m ready to see how it progresses in the future

My hope in virtual reality stories on this app has been restored once more. Let’s begin with the obvious “ Is this another crappy vr novel like the others that die out just as fast as they are up?” No, it is not. The mc Ethan is very deserving of this new chance at life( when you read you’ll find out why pretty fast). Warning- like most of Delz other novels this one is going to contain gore, and disturbing scenes that might bother others. If you can get over that, you’ll be happy that you continued to read through. The pacing so far has also been really good. The grammar, world-building, and writing quality are top tier, and this is something you’ll see in all of Delz’s novels. If you guys give this a chance, and want more, I recommend his other novels. I’m up to date on both of them and they are top contenders on the site in my opinion. Am I biased…maybe, maybe not. Does this take away from the fact that this and the other novels are high quality content. No, especially since it is rare to find high quality works on this site. I’m ready to see Emilio’s journey in the world of Arcadius

The story started off strong, and snagged my attention from the beginning . The pacing and the quality of this novel are also pretty good. The first couple of chapters reveal why the mc has his nickname “ The Martial Arts King”. Everything from the action scenes, to the various environments are described in depth(which allows my imagination to soar). Another thing I noticed was that the side characters introduced, threw me through a loop. They acted differently than what I was expecting, and I really enjoyed that. I’m excited to see how the Celestial Fist Tournament plays out.