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Replied to Lostlastacc_pout Absolutely incorrect, from the information so far provided he should have been given the ‘Black’ grade instead. I really love this novel and the world building hower the author repeatedly downplays Jakes growth in order to better follow the pre-planned story. No matter how I look at it, Jake should have been rated at Black instead of White just so that the author could prolong his growth.
"White!"
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
3yr
Replied to Eric_Fanguy Incorrect, the story stated before that Jake had a body in the top 1% of people on earth BEFORE he switched worlds. Therefore this is clearly the author downplaying his past claims in order to maintain a more balanced character growth. I wont add personal opinions into this, just facts in that the author wants to portray Jake as someone who was almost completely ordinary on his journey to become stronger.
It also allowed Jake to better appreciate his level.His speed was higher than his own, as was his technique. It was predictable. Jake had only been training for a few months. His physique was now relatively athletic, but could not compete with someone who had been practicing martial arts since childhood.
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
3yr
Commented I must be confused, Previously it was stated that leveling up increased his physique. However it hasnt leveled up once more after he improved by 30 lvls? Is this an inconsistency to make the plot progress at a slower pace so the author can extend the ‘growth phase’ of the character? Or was i mistaken about the fact that it said as he leveled his physique would also increase?
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The Demon Monarch System
Fantasy · Syphiinz
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