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that*
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Naruto : Invincible Uchiha
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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Now, that's an insult to Kakashi's abilities if I have ever seen one.
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You've got to fix that grammar brother
ch 0 1 Village Massacre
The BloodBath System in another World
Fantasy · Azurian_Element
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either external or internal
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King Of Limbo
Fantasy · God_Of_Brutality
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what is this for?
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The Reaper of Souls
Fantasy · Zuess_Wraith
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1 - Croygel, although i almost picked number 2 cz i'm brazilian.
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The Reaper of Souls
Fantasy · Zuess_Wraith
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Don't worry about it.
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The First Demon Diablo
Fantasy · Ghost_Playing
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I don't think there is a need to be putting these kind of comments in the story, it breaks the immersion.
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The First Demon Diablo
Fantasy · Ghost_Playing
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I feel like that Lol thing in the beginning was kinda weird but ok.
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The First Demon Diablo
Fantasy · Ghost_Playing
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That would definitely be a good feature for the exact reasons that you mentioned, i think there is an option to kinda make both of them, he can go back all the way or have the quick save, but the quick save is an option that he unlocks after he achieves certain level of power you know.
Just an idea tho.
With the last option remaining, Zero twisted so his body was above the wolfs. The wolf, as if it had no intelligence, just simply continued to munch on his left shoulder. Zero closed his eyes just before the two made impact with the ground. 'Should I try something different this time around? Maybe I will go after the sniper, Of course I would have to learn how to shoot one.' Zero's thoughts were cut off as everything went dark.
The Reaper of Souls
Fantasy · Zuess_Wraith
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Obviously this is a very small error, but just for aesthetics sake, the price is *3020*.
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The Reaper of Souls
Fantasy · Zuess_Wraith
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Thaanks
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Naruto: Rise of a God
Anime & Comics · xXTheDarkOneXx