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Amazing concept and even better writing, I really enjoy reading this novel and can't wait to see how the author progresses it. the pace is amazing as is the grammar

Fantastic, a really amazing piece of writing, the character development is amazing, world building great, grammar awesome, no complaints. The Author wasn't happy with how they continued after the Silisia arc, but I loved the pace and how it is progressing so far, if the author isn't happy with how good it is I can't wait to see what they do to it now. I eagerly await the new chapter, thanks for the great book

This novel has everything, a great story, character development, romance and action, can't fault it. Grammar and spelling is really good and if there are mistakes they're so small that they don't effect the flow of the read. I would 100% recommend this novel, only down side is having to wait for the next chapter ;)

A very interesting idea, normally I read system novels, but actually having a novel where the system is the MC is a nice twist, really enjoy the novel and the pace of the story, character development is great and the way the author writes from the perspective of the system is really well done

From beginning to end the story grabs your attention, the author does amazingly at creating a mental picture for the characters and the world, with his awesome descriptions and detailed backgrounds, your allowed to really feel how the characters are meant to be. The only downside is that I felt the ending was rather abrupt and ended in a bery “simple” manner Other than that an incredible story from start to finish, yes the start is similar to TBATE but the auther adds his own essence to the story and takes it in a new direction after the first few chapter