Webnovel Author: CyprianNasat - Novel Collection

And I do take Borading School Juliet as a reference for my writing

Haha...I don't want to say it rasicm but it's kind the word for it but them also want to fix that by bulid those academy....but as you read it... it's not that easy.

Thanks yuu~

Reading the short story part ... makes the story enough to grab my attention already....good use of grammar and anime -style writing style which I myself am quite familiar with....overall,I really like this style of writing and I hope you continue to write it and don't leave because it's a pity if you don't continue this good story ...so keep up your efforts and I am always behind supporting you.

Not much I can say about it .... I have a mix of feelings about the story but I will continue to keep reading it because why do I feel that way .... so do I like it or not?....Yes,I like it, it's still interesting to read ... it's just that it might take time for me to really understand the story.

Overall ... the story is good and I understand what you want to convey to the reader...you just have to correct your grammatical mistakes and the use of "he/she" because sometimes, female characters are called "he".....So I suggest you to re -read your story after writing it before publishing it here...That's all I saw through my reading earlier ... if you can correct the mistake I mention earlier I guarantee your story will be better and more interesting.

Thank Yuuu!~