Webnovel Author: Saint_Grey - Novel Collection

[1st paragraph] A very good start for a novel, and what I can say is that the author did a very good description to help paint the scenes better in our minds. But I also noticed that the authors writing stile is too informal, and I advise him to make use of any editing tool like 'quillbot' which I also use on some occasions. [2nd paragraph] A great start to a story, and I can say that the author did an excellent job of describing the scenes to help us see them better. However, I noted that the author's writing style is too casual, and I recommend that he utilize an editing tool such as 'quillbot,' which I also use on occasion. [3rd paragraph] The second paragraph is identical to the first, except that it has been edited by Quillbot to make it more professional and remove unnecessary filler words. Same with this paragraph.

Keeps getting better

Good chapter!

A very promising beginning 👍

Thanks for the chapter

I'm already loving it