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Looks like light at the end of the tunnel... Has been by far my least favourite arc...

Felt like the chapter dragged a bit... Felt like something that should have been a quarter of a chapter was over explained... Author does that sometimes, should be aware and try to not do it most times... Explaining lethargy over & over isn't development...

100 free stats is a lot to save for emergencies... Not a fan of MCs who don't distribute stats for because of some excuse...

Is the novel going to release just on R***lR**d or its going to be on webnovel too???

Does not match RILEY's personality... Feels like a forced scenario to break MEGAWOMAN... I mean why bomb NEW THERAN to kill some of the THEMARIAN... To intentionally antogonise a race you fear as GODS if you are not going to eradicate them all... So much of the scenario here doesn't make sense... Feels like forced drama and this is usually what starts and makes novels go downhill... Deaths that are not well thought out but feel like shock factor to break or drive another character... Its hard to defend this arc, its been a very boring & most of the points don't make sense...

Probably wasn't that bomb... But a reverse engineered bomb by the elders from collars given to them by MEGAWOMAN... And if you read in between the lines it seems like the RILEY ELDER CLONE was the one who kept encouraging the elders' fears... Probably following orders of RILEY making even less sense...

Book is all over the place with Setsuna & Sakuma story... Doesn't make sense... Feels like a forced push to make her fall for the MC... Novel is slowly losing its charm and unique concept...

*The book is heading the wrong direction* 1ST LINE

The book is loding direction... RILEY is known to kill with his hands or powers, he does not manipulate people to do it... He wouldn't enjoy it... Now the author just turned RILEY into a person with a HARD ON for killing... He is no longer a very complicated and emotionally unstable killing machine... Don't even understand the direction the book is heading anymore and the quality is dropping at an alarming rate...

Hope Setsuna doesn't fall for the MC too... Novel is slowly becoming wish fulfillment not a unique work like it was before...

Feel like the powerlevels of the book fluctuate too much... Themarians and Theran are treated like GODS & the next minute they are killed by an ray like ANTS... Also if its RILEY who did this I will drop the book... Its like we go full circle, when RILEY shows growth or a different purpose for living the author pulls the rug out from under him for a stupid reason like the voices in his head... It has been showed that RILEY can ignore the voices and the impulse to kill... Novel is slowly losing ground... Losing what made it unique... Flactuating between making RILEY a villain or a hero... And why he does things doesn't make sense no more...

Author should avoid making every girl in the story fall for him... Everybody has different taste but it seems everybody is just falling for him... And he is just destroying his allies left & right for no reason its becoming counter productive to maintaining multiple relationships when he keeps making enemies for no reason...

A chapter behind scibbl***b again???

Ever since the introduction of the planet destroying weapon I know it will destroy earth... Weird that Felix's alive masters & the rest of the progenitor council are not watching earth with either subordintes or tech considering how the Darkin faction reacted to loses before... After all if a progenitor destroys a planet or race of the person they lost to, it would ruin their entertainment... Feels that would just be a forced moment to break Felix... Felix is such a planner & Lady Sphynx thought doesn't care about earth cares about Felix's mental status I feel they would make a plan to protect earth from the Darkin faction knowing full well how low the can go... Would feel force if earth ends up being destroyed...

Interesting

Sister sandwich

Side stories are fun... Author should consider moving it to the old version of Stealing Spree so author can avoid having so many unfinished books on his page... After all its easier to read books from authors who finish their story... There the side story won't burden the flow of the story and can be tagged as finised once the author is done...