Roy_Wells - Profile

the book was great. but the ending. is say the worse ending I've ever experience. it felt so rushed like season 2 of promised neverland. so much potential just to throw it down the drain in the end

if you don't mind taking some critics. The story of this novel is interesting. I am on chapter 169 and there are few things I like and dislike. As far as just critics goes. this novel would be better if their want do many grammatical errors as well as plot errors. It makes it slightly difficult to understand certain situations that good on. I like that the story is trying to skip some parts people would consider boring but their are too many time skips that kinda takes away from the feeling of reading about someone who started at the bottom and he into a power house. at first I kinda didn't like that the summons would be like blank personalities and would just do as ordered but by now I see that they are starting to have personalities based on their origins. I think a few things should have been explain to help readers understand what was going on and battles should be at least a little more detailed but that come come later after the plot errors get fixed a well as some grammar. one thing that bothered me the most was that somethings where not explained properly because it would say one thing at first then change, and this wasn't limited too explanations or events, it was even in the minor things that still matters cause you wouldn't know exactly who was speaking or who was thinking and last who was doing what. Names would be different as well as gender and also what dynasties or locations was being discussed. the novel has potential to be good but do to many difficulties to be able to read and understand, I'm giving it a barely passable grade. Since I'm only still in the early stages of the novel I do hope someone the issues I mention would be fixed, as well as some others that I haven't mentioned or haven't found yet. Love the idea. so I will continue reading to see how things develop cause I know that writers usually getting better with time. And I like to support new upcoming artists. Best of luck and hope that you continue the novel.