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Liviing

2yr

Posted

Amazing story! The characters are very fascinating and enjoyable to read. The synopsis had already gotten my attention and the story managed to hook me completely. Hope to read more!

Morphing Iniquity

Teen · Tailrs ink

Liviing

2yr

Posted

First of all, the synopsis is missing, so I have no idea what I'm going into. The story looks like it's based around Hindu Mythology. There are different terms mentioned in the narrative, which I think would be better if the characters or something else introduced this term. The paragraph are long, so you might want to break it. I liked the context you've given at the start of the story, but it also comes off as an info dump, which could be a bit boring to read. I also like the notes given to make the readers understand the terms. The story is relatively good in my opinion, but you should pay attention to grammar, and mainly the splitting of paragraph. And yeah, write the synopsis. Slowly improve yourself, and I hope it turns out to be a great novel.

KAALCHAKRA

Fantasy · AJAY_SHRESTHA

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Dr_Malice

yeah there's something like that a bit different than what you said, but something like that, its towards the end of the novel

[No. Only you can see it.] The system replied in a cold voice.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Karen_Manager

there are plenty of other references as well

When he was about to finish his exercise, he saw a huge green pig with many buildings above it come towards the clan. This was the merchant caravan.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Karen_Manager

Thank you so much for reading.

ch 24 Inner Feelings

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to fivespite

I am sorry for that. It won't happen again. Those were rough times.

ch 0 8 Skill Upgraded to Summon Undead

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Raider325

which comparision? The previous world one or the mother's womb one?

A flow of mana went through his body which made him feel like he returned to his mother's womb. It was warm and comfortable. It lasted for a few seconds, but the comfortable feeling still lingered. "Wow, my wounds all healed up!" Mizar was amazed at the system. In his previous life, even a Spirit Mage, which was roughly equal to Middle Stage Healing Mage in this world couldn't possibly heal a person this fast.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to

it's hawk's mom

When he was about to finish his exercise, he saw a huge green pig with many buildings above it come towards the clan. This was the merchant caravan.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to

When he was about to finish his exercise, he saw a huge green pig with many buildings above it come towards the clan. This was the merchant caravan.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Ki_Sa

you can say that

[No. Only you can see it.] The system replied in a cold voice.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to fivespite

yeah I am so sorry. I was going through rough times those days, so I had no option. I gets better as you go no.

ch 0 7 New Function: Shop

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to tea_lord

yeah he sold it. It was a mistake on my part, I forgot to change the name of the new staff. He sold and bought a new staff. Thank you for pointing it out

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FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Posted

It's a good story with near flawless grammar. Even though I don't like romance stories, this got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it up.

The Vampire's Love: You Are My Destiny

Fantasy · Lizabelle88

Liviing

3yr

Posted

The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.

The Legendary Tales of Indra

Urban · devilDestroyer22

Liviing

3yr

Posted

I don't typically like novels that have a harem, but I like this one. It's not like the majority of those novels with all girls having the same sort of personality and I also like the premise of the story. Keep it up.

Endbringer

Fantasy · Shionokami

Liviing

3yr

Replied to Jeffbasky

thank you for your honest criticism, I will try to improve it.

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Liviing

3yr

Replied to YoungMaster_MtTai

he got familiar to it during the short timeskip after the wolf tide

ch 0 1 Immortal will make you No. 1 Necromancer!

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

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