Webnovel Author: TheSuccessor

TheSuccessor

6mth

Posted

I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

TheSuccessor

6mth

Posted

I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

TheSuccessor

6mth

Posted

I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.

TheSuccessor

7mth

Posted

This story is nothing short of entertaining. It has some nice flow and progression. Good writing. Good development. And the world background is also present.

TheSuccessor

8mth

Posted

One of the strengths of first-person stories is that it really helps make the main character shine because of it. We get to see them develop and to grow along in the story. This is one I'm excited for.

TheSuccessor

9mth

Commented

Here's what you should do. If you can't figure out the others, just try to do the ones you know. For example, if you don't know what the rising action is, then just do your beginning. Write that beginning and soon enough, your brain will garner more ideas that will eventually lead to your rising action.

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How to Write An Action-Packed Book

Urban · TheSuccessor

TheSuccessor

10mth

Posted

This book is quite good in my opinion. I love the way the author makes the MC so narcissistic in a way.

TheSuccessor

11mth

Posted

Something about new worlds being created just makes me excited to see the immersive world that is being introduced to me. It's very exciting, very interesting, and very intriguing.

TheSuccessor

11mth

Replied to Kara_wish_writes

RIP for them; wish them luck though.

I got to my locker 426, and I opened my locker. I saw that all my books were still there, and I sighed with relief. Sometimes some people know other people's codes, like Kirk, and they snatch my books for fun, as if it's just a normal thing to do to a normal person.

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

"I'll be fine being alone in prom," I said, sighing. "It's not like I care anyways. We can always come back home, play video games, pretend I didn't waste my hours on something useless."

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

I guess they're not much of an emergency if they keep happening every time.

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

Just to tell you about my life: I'm a sophomore, so I've been here for at least a year. We moved from Utah to California because my dad got a new job as a cameraman for Hollywood. We would probably live in a better house, but my dad was very skeptical about the amount of money needed to pay the bills and all the stuff I care less to think about.

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

Today was a day that I most hated, the day of prom. Days and weeks and months of little snippets about the prom annoyed me already. But the day when it is, it's the only thing trending in Wolfpack School. People would rush up to me as if I give a care in the world asking: Do you have someone for prom?

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

I'm a boy who just despises the presence of other people that seem to be all over not only my physical body, but my mental brain. The feeling of awkwardness drowns me, and it almost puts me in a bad mood. But that doesn't mean I'm some type of person who finds pleasure in being alone with no one to love you, or to care even about you.

Spy Mage System

Fantasy · GMSJakers

TheSuccessor

1yr

Commented

Mhm, I see ya

Do you ever get any of those times where you feel as if the world is against what you do, how you do—almost your entire being? The world is planning and surveying each way your life could just turn in the opposite direction of how you wanted and how you expected things to be.