Webnovel Author: ABENAWAR - Novel Collection

ABENAWAR

2yr

Posted

Overall, great story! A few grammar mistakes here and there but who really cares? Fast paced and absorbing. Really could tell the mc's feeling and thoughts.

ABENAWAR

2yr

Replied to ChunkyThighs

a little late but thanks bro

ch 0 1 Prologue

ABENAWAR

2yr

Replied to Lerito

pretty it means average

‘You can do this Rose! Zombies are weak against fire and electrical attacks. This guy is really durable even after being hit with a mediocre level spell. I haven’t learnt High level spells yet, then I’ll need to improvise’

BLAIR

Fantasy · ABENAWAR

ABENAWAR

2yr

Replied to Cymbalic

oh yea

Rose only sighed as she looked back at the board. “The time limit is 14 days. Maybe we could wait for the quest board to be updated tomorrow?”

BLAIR

Fantasy · ABENAWAR

ABENAWAR

2yr

Commented

at this point it's gonna be even more twists and turns

A/N: Volume two is coming to an end soooon... You can look forward to one more volume, that is, Volume 3 and the story of Ashe will come to a nice little end. Also, Volume three will focus more on the soft, sweet things, so hope to see you there too.

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

2yr

Commented

even tho a few chapters ago Holland already beamed out in front of them? sus

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The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

2yr

Replied to Orc27354

Thank you for reading as well[img=recommend]

BLAIR

Fantasy · ABENAWAR

ABENAWAR

2yr

Replied to _midnightsunshine_

someday

Matthew scratched his head. “Ah I guess it can’t be helped. I know this is sudden, but…” He put down his hand and placed it on his waist. “Do you want to join us? As a team?”

BLAIR

Fantasy · ABENAWAR

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

press F to donate 10 coins

[Pay your respects by donating 10 coins to the game]

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Posted

it is basically like an anime, keep it up especially with the updates. a few errors here and there but iits all good................ I am out of words

Miss Number Two

Teen · missyweeb

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

sonic brain

"Your brother and that ex-bully are in hospital now anyway," the hedgehog mind said. Ashe's mind lit up with that knowledge. Her hedgehog mind was right…they can't say anything now. She felt like patting her hedgehog mind for the unexpected help. 'You deserve to be named,' Ashe told the hedgehog mind.

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

you mean flabs?

His back rested on the edge of the counter as he placed the glass on it and unbuttoned his collar. When he reached the fifth button, Ashe stirred. His chest was showing now and you could see the starting of baby abs from the opening.

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

ashe be like: concentrated breathing, first form

ch 45 The 'Who Ashe Likes' Test

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

NO HORNY *BONK*

ch 28 11:00 PM

The Legend Of Breakfire

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Posted

The background and system is good for now. Hopefully the author will keep it up. The characters have their own unique personalities and relationships which is great. World build seems pretty well though so far. Overall is good. **. me help the author for a few things in this book huehue

My Amazing Dream System

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

I guess that's one way to describe her

"It's just that…I didn't the think the future of mankind would be a disabled baby woman."

My Amazing Dream System

Fantasy · _midnightsunshine_

ABENAWAR

3yr

Commented

what other versions are there I wonder

"Tiara Keeser. We are happy to welcome you into the deluxe version of The Dream System. You will be experiencing a lot of things but don't worry, all this is in your head and it is in the end, just a game."