Webnovel Author: Dalton_Reutlinger - Novel Collection

Thank you!

Not really my type of story as I find the whole "school setting" to be a little overdone, but I found it interesting enough to read two chapters before calling it quits for the sake of saving my eyes from Digital Eye Strain. All in all, it's a decent enough story with a well-thought-out protagonist. That being said, there is a fair number of spelling and grammatical errors, but I'm guessing the author's first language isn't English, so I'm willing to overlook that for the most part. Even though the picture says otherwise, I give it a 4 star.

I can only assume it's from copy and pasting from Wattpad, or maybe even from my girlfriend sending me back the edits. Sometimes the novel doesn't have any spaces in it, so I have to put them in manually, but it's hard to tell where a sentence is supposed to end with a giant wall of text staring me down. Now that I've seen and been informed of these breaks in the dialogue I'll keep a sharp eye out for them,

Definitely a talented writer, that much is a given. This story starts off strong with excellent writing skills and character descriptions. Unfortunately, I'm not able to read for very long on a screen because it tends to hurt my eyes after a while, but I will definitely be coming back a couple times a week to check this story out.

Hey, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it! I’m kind of curious what you meant by the synopsis could be better, though.