Badges 3
Moments 63
2yr
Commented Same characters, new chapter, new vibe
ch 39 Tag-teamed (18++)
New Life As A Lewd Futanari Succubus (futa smut bdsm r18 sex story)
Fantasy · YuujiEveryleaf
2yr
Commented So far, I have a positive impression of the work, but let me give you some advice.
It will be good if you give a plausible explanation why the Demon Lord does not want demons to walk on the earth. The first, not everyone has read your other work, and the second, this will greatly help in the development of the plot logic.
Because some demons look like pacifist warriors or bees fighting honey.
ch 187 Chapter 185. Demon's Rule
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
2yr
Replied to This is not so much a braindead or dumb hero, but too naive. I think the main problem that mc is is like a hostage of "circumstances". In the begining, the hero did something, now he is only reacts, and does not act. Even when "playing" with partners, he gives the initiative. It's not bad in itself, but too ordinary life.
"You are a hero not because you have strength, but because you make decisions and take responsibility."
ch 186 Chapter 184. I Will Give My Loyalty to You
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
2yr
Commented It seems the name for the skill is too patriarchal. More suitable for declaring control over an area than a form of marriage.
ch 186 Chapter 184. I Will Give My Loyalty to You
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Huntington family growing quickly.
ch 20 The Nametag In That Café
Harem Reborn
Games · Magic_
3yr
Commented After "finish him", i got the some kind of deja vu. It's th like Mortal Kombat phrase. About plot, i think author gave to many girls to mc from the start and relationships between them couldn't develop the same speed as reader expect to be. So we had a feeling that mc is too slow.
ch 18 One Thing Fate Can't Control
Harem Reborn
Games · Magic_
3yr
Commented Let's be honest, this story doesn't have any mind-blowing plot twist, but... hey, does anybody remember the title of this novel? Like, we've read about some epic exp grind... both aspects of it (you know what I mean ;). Any new skills for mc, some progress, etc?
ch 74 Chapter Seventy-Four: Elentra's Massage
Ero Skill Tree
Fantasy · ohhdearme
3yr
Commented The best of it is that she keeps in mind the other girl needs and feelings. That's what makes her a good partner.
ch 30 Sucking For The First Time (18++)
New Life As A Lewd Futanari Succubus (futa smut bdsm r18 sex story)
Fantasy · YuujiEveryleaf
3yr
Commented Some students aren't meant to be tamed, some of them could turn into a strict teacher. Very bad teacher.
ch 96 Chapter 94. Scandalous Chairwoman and Untamed Model Student I
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Does made-cafe have that kind cringe staff? And where the hell our Celia lost her brother complex? It's rare to see that someone is so friendly with a stranger who's flirting with your date. Is there some kind of spell or something?
ch 91 Chapter 89. Puyi, puyi~ Love, love~ Ethan!
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Too many demon hunters in this town. I mean, how many DH for 100k citizens? If they're people then shall be money in their pockets. They have equipment, costs and etc.
And yes, by now all DH are young and pretty people. Are they hiring them in model agencies?
ch 90 Chapter 88. Maid In Pink Pigtails
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Replied to Krann expect exp expand
ch 66 Chapter 64. What ?! An Incubus Teaches S*x Education?
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Pretty good chapter with fresh interesting game. Though I have no idea what the dice game is in real life, this have a quick pace and random quest from cards. That's give maximum atantion to "action" rather than game itself.
ch 71 Chapter 69. Sexy Naughty Game III (18+)
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Nice chapter, but two drinks is a little bit strange. He is in demon form so he must have better alcohol tolerance. And more of that his race and body weight are the main thing.
Historically north people drunk a lot of strong alcohol, they've developed tolerance, and build a culture of drinking, when you drink to taste some flavour, relax, let yourself lose control and feel freedom. Drinking as competition is so useless, in the end you'll find yourself drunk as f*ck with no pleasure, feeling like a sh*ty sh*t next morning. Don't do that.
Drink for your own pleasure not to prove something.
ch 70 Chapter 68. Sexy Naughty Game II (18+)
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Wait a minute. Blindfold, twin sister (diamond), something dirty are going happen. These tentacle monsters (not they appearence, but they naughty minds) trying to fool pretty lamia, and innocent, humble incubus demon. [img=recommend]
ch 69 Chapter 67. Sexy Naughty Game I
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented For some reason I have a feeling that without some kind of doppelganger our mc'll have 24/7 busy schedule. Even with all that power, it's too troublesome to meet all his partners one by one. Yeah mia, pearl and diamond are formed in one squad, but Olivia + her mother + Emma + sister + foxy... and will be more. See it's hard just to remember all the names, not saying about plot twists. That's dilemma.
ch 68 Chapter 66. Dilemma
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
3yr
Commented Imagine. Hey, sis, I've found a pet on my way home. Her name is Foxy and she's going to live with us for some time. Yeah, yeah, I'll feed, clean, play with her. No worries. Almost no loud noises, just some screaming and moans, when I'll be playing with her. By the way what do you think about girls with animals ears, tails?
ch 67 Chapter 65. A Naughty Servant and A Gentle Master (18+)
The Incubus System
Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
mur842
ch 70 Widowmaker
New Life As A Lewd Futanari Succubus (futa smut bdsm r18 sex story)
Fantasy · YuujiEveryleaf