Bob_Washere - Profile

Ill keep this short and sour, this book has alot of Story problems, First i think it was bold of the author to try and incorporate science and fantasy. However within the first ten chapters we are supposed to believe These abilites will provide more firepower than what the modern military has at it disposal, against creatures who skin not bodies are resistant to Bullets, first armor piercing, second kinetic energy. Second telekinesis is like time travel, Very complex to have in a story. why? To versatile, the user can easily kill by stopping Hearts or rupturing a blood vessel in theIr enemies heads. I can list several others but i said ill keep it short. In summary this story is best enjoyed when you ignore science, dont over think stuff, and havent read any dc/marvel comics which Is on a whole other level of power usage and story complexity.