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A good start to intrigue the readers, word flow that'll get you immersed into the story and world background that'd make you feel like you're living the character. A very good book, the author's choice of words is great and I'd recommend it.

It's just beautiful, an exciting accelerating adventure. I like the world background and character designs. The author's writing style is just great though there are just some ****y bits of grammar errors. One should definitely read this book, it just clicks perfectly. I wish the author more success with the book.

I haven't completed the book but it got me hooked from the first chapter. This is the first time I am reading a book about cultivation but I can say it was worth it. The author has a wild imagination which he portrayed perfectly and the world background is also detailed. I like the way the author introduced the world to the readers in the very first chapter. I hope the author continues on with the book.

The descriptiveness and dialogue of the author are exceptional. The book paints a warm feeling to the readers, I was grinning while reading it. The author portrayed the characters in a way that would leave you asking for more. I also like the dynamics involved. The story is sure to bloom successfully. Great work author!.

I wish the author the best and hopes this book become a success.

I really like the descriptiveness and writing style of the author. The first chapters are a real draw in. The world background and characters were perfectly described. The personality of little Lawrence is what I fell in love with. Keep it up.

Despite, the story being set in the 19's, the author was perfect in weaving through this timeline. I especially love the main character, Chance. I love the way the author vividly describes his personality and feelings. The world background was exceptional. I hope Chance doesn't lose his love like he did in the past. Overall, I've fallen in love with the author

The author was successful in creating a vivid world background. The novel is intriguing and I couldn't stop reading. The adventures of Xavier started in an enthralling way. I'd like it much more if it was a bit less fast-paced. Overall, the author did a good job.

I really loved the plotline and world background. The author detailed it perfectly, I could imagine the scenes. It's my first time reading a romantic comedy novel, but I can it is the best. Keep up the good work and I'm sure after editing, it would turn into a masterpiece.

I really loved it!. The characters, world background, personalities, everything was perfectly detailed. I could feel the thrill of the novel, I couldn't stop reading. I'd be sure to read more chapters of your novel.