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A continuation of my previous comment. How Jack is written makes it super hard to read the story again because you realize how much he lets himself be walked over and treated. Like legitimately I'm having a hard time reading it again since I know Jack will never change and continue to let himself be walked all over by others. Like no backbone or spine even when he is stronger than almost everyone else.

So was re reading Achievement Junkie and I gotta say Jack has little character growth in the way of becoming partners with Duran or whatever his name is. Like reading it again I gotta say Jack is pushed around and never gotten a say of his opinion. That's obvious in the very beginning. So I gotta ask what benefit did the neutral god gain besides cleaning up the planet which he could have easily done without Jack. As much as I like Jack I think you could have made him less of a push over as he is. Like is literally forced into how many marriages??? Has no say over it especially when he still is in mourning for the first person he fell in love with. Like that right there should have been a good place for character development and have him stand up for himself. But nope you make him a push over and someone who goes along with others wishes. That's a servant or follower not a partner. Very clear difference. Very upsetting that you tried writing Jack as the guy's partner but in reality you wrote Jack as a servant.

So re-reading this book and I gotta say 90 percent of it feels like Jack has no choice over anything at all. It feels like he's forced along and has no say and that in itself is sad because it leads to almost no character development for him. Like he is more of a servant or subordinate instead of a partner to the leader of the neutral gods it feels. Like 90 percent of the story he never has a true say over what he needs/wants to do.

I don't mind a prequel but I wish you would update this every now and again. It's been over 3 years since I first started this book and it probably has only gotten 100 chapters max in the last 2 years it seems.

No offense but your writing in more problems then there needs to be. Like lets be honest here. All these new problems and issues popping up isn't really exciting anymore especially with how long we have to wait for new chapters. Like I was so excited when you announced this book but it feels like you had no plan for this book or how it would go and are writing on the fly for each chapter. There's things that happened way to fast and even make me wish that you would go back and rewrite the chapters to make them feel more cohesive and fit with the previous book more. Like it's literally one new problem after another never truly solving the first problem without causing massive destruction or death it seems. Like I loved the series but rereading it I can see alot of things now that don't fit right or are even resolved.

I'm happy you released all the chapters without us having to pay extra. I can understand where your coming from for the storyline in a way and hopefully the prequel you write helps you making future chapters!

Finish Dual Cultivation first before making another story!!!! I've been waiting for more chapters of that book but you have yet to make any it seems like.......

I'm confused on why Eva and Shuangtian took so much or any at all when they can do the divine trial themself. It almost seems like they are lazy are just moching of Draco if anything. Especially Eva considering we haven't seen her do much of anything at all. I can kinda understand Shuangtian because of her whole situation training but this is just laziness from the two of them.

I'm happy you started posting again.

So again your other series is over why can't this one start back up anymore? I just finished reading it again to this point and I'm sadden that it's not going again when it had such a massive following.

Hey so not trying to be mean but can you update the chapters more? you hardly release chapters for this series and Cultivation Online so what gives? I can understand if your focused more on one than others but this is terrible it went from daily uploads to uploading once every month it seems.

Probably not the same author on top of it not making any sense at all. I feel like this was someone's attempt to pick up popularity off the original series. I truly don't understand what's going on cause how did he go from being the number one guild in God's Domain to restarting his Tier 3 account when he was Tier 6. Literally a God in God's Domain. Not matter what someone says I won't believe that this is the original writer.

so its been almost 2 years since posted a chapter for this book. can we consider this book dead at this point? Cause you're other book is finished so no excuse to not finish this one

This is the latest chapter for Guild Wars not Darius Supreme. Also why did this only cost like 5 to 10 coins here when in guild wars it was like 18 to 28? Makes no sense especially when you are just posting stats which we dont care about really. it's been shown over and over from your readers that we thinks its just a waste of coins at that point. You can condense the characters stats even more if you cared or tried

so I've been rereading this and I gotta say in the end it really doesn't make sense why they took Feifei away. Like ya the have a slightly easier time but left them with no way to communicate is one of the dumbest things to do for Luville and Soren. Luville even knows Wally didnt send Krune without anything to talk to Fiefie with. Really confuses me cause it doesnt make any sense especially considering that she is his Dao Companion. If we are doing it by the same right Luville and Cellia should split up and go their own ways no point in sticking together since they will get to complacent and not put in effort since their 2 gods working together

wrong chapter. this is the aftermath chapter

love the bbook! wish it was longer to be honest!

been a year at least now when is this gonna come back?!?!? I understand you have another series going but you completely dropped this to do another one that in my opinion is lacking so much more compared to this one. Personally I prefer to read this one over the other one but I will take what I can get since you apparently aren't continuing this one.

You know I love your works and all and considering this is my second time reading this book says something. But considering everything Jake just has been through wouldnt it be normal for him to eventually snap? Like jesus the guy is having women thrown at him left and right especially by their families. As any normal and sane person they get fed up and snap. Dude doesnt want this and I understand on how everything goes but he could have bluntly threatened to kill the dudes daughter as soon as he had a chance to stop him from forcing the marriage. plain and simple ya she may be a little stronger right now but what about a month from then? he definitely be stronger and could easily kill her for allowing her father to do that and basically making her own father's plan backfire along with him failing to protect his daughter because he forced her to marry someone that didnt want to marry her. Plain thinking in my opinion. Real stupid how this events played out along with how you added her to the harem. Could have easily avoided the conflict by not even trying. To be honest in that world and society ya Jack is unique but where he came from he break eventually under the pressure and probably lose his cool this would have been a good showcase of pushing a supposed hero to far and it doesnt matter the level difference because at that point the feud between either the adventures association and the auction house would become irreversible due to how things play out. Especially if he could contact the guy who traveld with Jack boom issue solved plain and simple. But nope bad writing for this chapter in my opinion. Overall love the book but these events could have been played out 1000× better if more thought was put into it.