imhermione

Lots of rude readers out there

First of all, this novel is genius on its own way. And the writing quality is impeccable. Second, if you want an overpowered mc who thinks he can overcome anything with reckless effort and guts alone, leave - this isn't for you. This has no system, and no cold-blooded irrational brute protag. Author poured a lot of thought in crafting the mc that makes him realistic enough for the readers to imagine. I mean, if you were in his shoes, the way he reacts is somehow believable. Also, he is very smart. Which leads me to my next point: Thirdly, this webnovel breaks down stereotypes and lots of fantasy tropes. Who doesnt get shocked when transported to another timeline? So as I said, if you want full blast cultivation and too OP protag who can do it all, this isn't your cup of tea. But if you are patient, and one who appreciates excellent writing, creativity and lore, I would highly recommend this. This is an adventure that is rare to find in this platform. The development, the flow, the characters, the imagination - its really good. Keep up the good work, author 👏

I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.