LordRigby

9mth

Replied to Mintu_Sharma_5538

I think the author is building the MC’s powers and general abilities through more sunlight exposure? MC currently reminds me of superboy (the clone mf) from young justice in terms of his current abilities

"Well, I'm not exactly a genius like Tony Stark or Dr. Banner. My IQ is decent, around 120, but I don't have their advanced knowledge. So, I guess my main contribution here is my strength."

LordRigby

11mth

Commented

Peak, and I am a bit biased because I do like House Celtigar a lot. But I do think the timelining could use some work - or at least make it more explicit of the MC’s age throughout the past few chapters, there was a timeskip that threw me off slightly.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Town’s Ruler - 103 AC

HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale

TV · Giver_of_Crabs

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

Good work.

ch 0 1 Chapter 19 : satisfaction

LordRigby

1yr

Replied to 6BigBoneMeat9

Firey priest was peak fiction

As for the rest of my appearance, I have no facial hair, I wear absolutely no jewelry whatsoever, and I generally avoid wearing gangster clothing because I don't want to be mistaken for a gang member. In addition to that, I occasionally wear superhero-themed clothing, but whenever I go to someplace important like work, I always try to look and act professional. At the same time, I always try to avoid wearing black clothing because, in simple terms, my family's religious belief says that any human being wearing black from head to toe is considered a devil spawn and that the only kind of devil spawn that would wear black from head to toe would be the Antichrist.

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Anime & Comics · The_Fictional_Sema

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

ch 0 3 Chapter 1

Lost: Crazy Rich Asians

Movies · Fantasies_From_God

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

Will we be getting any descriptions of the appearances belonging to these 2 new OC ETERNALS? Also keep it up, I’m always one to enjoy a good eternals fanfiction

ch 0 5 New Arrival (1)

Marvel : Hyperion

Anime & Comics · HarHarMahadev

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

There is some potential with this route

- Ancient One (Yao)(this one was a surprise to me, but there was more than just one who suggested her. After thinking about it, I also think this would kinda make sense as Ichibe is quite 'wise' or at least as 'wise' as me, the author.)

The Monk in the MCU

Movies · Cedric_7512

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

I’ve finally watched the show and I can say with my own personal lordly opinion that this fanfiction is great - furthermore Miss Ann is the best, don’t get it twisted.

ch 10 The Game

Alice in Borderland: The Value of Life

Anime & Comics · SrCuervo

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

+1

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Marvel x HP: Moses' Odd-venture

Movies · 4give_NoobWriter

LordRigby

1yr

Posted

Honestly, this is the first fandiction I’ve seen of Kingdom - it’s a great show and has a excellent concept behind it when it comes to the zombies and how they’re made. This fanfic is alright, the writing quality could be better and so can the structure - yet it’s readable and you can see the story progress. Besides some general improvements to world building and writing I think this idea can do well.

Reincarnated in Kingdom

TV · Shadow_Kid978

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

Honestly this seems pretty interesting, I’m glad you uploaded a chapter. My only pet peeve is the ‘romance’ with the other girl, their reconcilliation just seemed a bit forced and unneeded. That’s just how I feel however - keep up the work.

ch 11 Chapter 11 - A Forming Bond

The Immortal World - Ikaris

Movies · The_Eternal_Ocean

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

Owari No Seraph for sure, or even House Of The Dragon

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LordRigby

1yr

Commented

It’s all cool man, this story is great but Uni is even greater. So make sure to take breaks to do things.

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LordRigby

1yr

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You did a good job handling this response, Sir Tickler of my Holy Order of Ticklers, but I’m like 90% sure this dude didn’t read your novel which by the way is great but was instead searching for a harem lemonfest with no plot pertaining to Issei, or just a braindead harem fic

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LordRigby

1yr

Commented

This is getting better and better mate, my only qualm is the pacing is a bit fast. Maybe before you jump straight into the next avengers movie we could get more background development, perhaps some involvement in any of the MCU Shows? That’s just my take but honestly this is going great.

ch 21 Age of Ultron 5

Marvel's Brightburn

Movies · Necro_

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

To san francisco we go!

ch 14 In Exchange of Power

I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]

Movies · ManofcultureQ_Q

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

This is brilliant, I give this book the LordRigby stamp of approval.

ch 11 Chat [Part-1]

I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]

Movies · ManofcultureQ_Q

LordRigby

1yr

Commented

Swing back

"He's hating the fact there's not a Slytherin champion," Amanda whispered by my side. I sighed, and smiled at her. She punched me in the sides. "Stop eye-twinkling," she hissed.