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Jay_Synergy

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Author's shameless review here. This is my newest story "The Villain Within". I am not sure of how often I will upload new chapters but I will try my best. I will also be doing things a bit different as I try to avoid major clichés to make my story a bit more unique. Some of you may remember my previous work "Man Made Demon" and thanks for the support on that work.

The Villain Within

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to NikTitanik866

I completely agree with your points which is why I dropped the story, and thank you for taking the time to give constructive criticism. I have plans for another story soon and plan to use all I have learned from experience, reviews, and comments in order to make it a much better story than this one was.

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to John_0548

ch 29 Friend Or Foe?

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Jlairu

ch 20 Terrifying Discoverey

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Alphasa

We shall see although I have been slacking on writing the story for a while.

ch 15 A Gift

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to ssanstuff

You have a good point. Maybe the other group members would have agreed that he was suspicious. Maybe he did not think of the old man helping him.

ch 20 Terrifying Discoverey

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to CaptainBoyHole

[Warning: DO NOT ENGAGE IN COMBAT]

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to CaptainBoyHole

If only he could :(

"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!" he angrily screamed and pounded the floor as tears flowed out of his closed eyelids.

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to DelinquentBalloon

Thank you. I am still new to this but have learned a lot.

ch 25 All Together

Man Made Demon

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Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Dadido

ch 0 1 A Ring

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to darklord_hades

[1 Available Stat Point]

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Adramelech

umm. You got a point. I'll change it to say he kept the skill activated during that time.

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Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to tuba_san

ch 0 1 End Of An Era

My Demon Lord Master

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to tuba_san

Thank you for the review :) I will definitely take your suggestions into consideration.

My Demon Lord Master

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Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to ghostshepherd

My plans were for him to not be stupid.

ch 0 3 The System

Man Made Demon

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Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Adel_Quinn

No but it's definitely the plan.

ch 0 5 The Trial

Man Made Demon

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Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Meat_Muncher

The water he drank had a spell that....through him into his thoughts where he would bet bullied and his dad comforted him. It wasn't his memories because he remembered that he was in a new world and his dad told him to keep fighting. Eh....idk how to explain it

"Your mom left because she had to" he claimed now trying to hold back his tears. "and you didn't choose to go to that world. You were forced there, and treated terribly."

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to Meat_Muncher

Im not that far into one piece.

"We will have to continue that training tomorrow, but for now let's see how much your hardening skill can improve your strength." he added as he stabbed his staff into the ground.

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to SirZed

I think about this every time he activates a skill, maybe I'll change it to where he does not have to say it. However, it's mainly so the readers know what is happening when he uses an ability.

Angry at the man for laughing, he took his stance one more. "Harden" he yelled before swinging his arm towards the huge boulder.

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

Jay_Synergy

3yr

Replied to _En

You have a point although I did come up with details for this which I chose to remove. Basically, they knew he wasn't actually a demon but a normal human with average strength. Also, it isn't that the dungeon is weak but one of the weaker dungeons. Dungeons are used for adventuring and stuff, they just threw him in one because why open a strong one just to send an average person to death. He would have 100% died if he didn't have The System.

He was unable to see much of his surroundings but overheard guards ask the escort for ID before saying they could "past through the walls."

Man Made Demon

Fantasy · Jay_Synergy

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