Badges 36
Moments 41
1yr
Commented Dupe Chap
ch 903 Snatching the Wristwatch (Part 1)
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
1yr
Commented Part of the chap is duplicate
ch 693 Giving Chase
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
1yr
Commented duplicate chap
ch 682 Subverting Your Expectations
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
1yr
Commented A small typo: you said "marrow" insteas of "arrow" when talking aboht arnak's bow and arrow
ch 639 In My Past (Part 4)
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
2yr
Commented Says felt asleep, rather than fell asleep
ch 166 A Blade of Grass
I Hate Systems
Fantasy · Overlord_Venus
2yr
Commented A good ending. Looking forward to what might appear in the third arc.
ch 230 Departure
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
2yr
Commented Don't worry about the chapters before or during the break. A break means you don't do work.
ch 202 Mana Control
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
2yr
Commented Manohar being brilliantly funny as always
ch 1452 Endless Training (Part 2)
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
2yr
Commented A changing cover could be really cool to see!
ch 115 Ice
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
2yr
Commented Taking it slow and showing the mindset can be just as important as conflict. Khan isn't a robot, he has feelings and thoughts and by sharing them, we become more invested and interested in the story as we grow closer to the characters and understand them better.
ch 111 Interactions
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
2yr
Commented Near the end you wrote George instead of Paul when they are speaking.
ch 101 Blanket
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
2yr
Commented Poor Martha. Wonder if she's ever going to get that favour paid back
ch 93 Honesty
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Greenfoot5
ch 534 Spirit
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos