Webnovel Author: DarkseidEquation - Novel Collection

The battle system of this story is very unique and it is great seeing the progression of the Zeph's character but also his abilities which increases interest in the book.

This book is very descriptive onto the characters and their emotional struggles. At first, it may seem 'edgy' but the characters have understandable emotions and their problems are portrayed in their actions but the dialogue could use some work but it's pretty great. Keep working and good luck!

Luna is an incredible protagonist and seeing how she interacts in the new world she is in really separates this story from generic different world stories.

This story is very calming and romance between Ryan and Rhea really mends it together to make it very soothing. There some spelling mistakes but not an abundance of them so I just suggest the author fix it by re-editing it. Still a great novel currently!

This book is very fascinating with the story development keeps getting better with the suspense and the great writing is due to that. If you like vampire stories then you will be immersed in this with the great world building.

This story certainly brings the emotions with the struggles that Beth and Sebastian go through and how their love keeps getting tested and it's great seeing how they go on. The vocabulary certainly does portray that and the author certainly takes their time in their craft.

This book crafts the characters greatly with the main character's progression and her dialogue to the characters as the story goes on helps prove it.

The writing is very exquisite and the author backs that up with great vocabulary used. They help build the emotions between the characters which portrays the different situations and struggles they go through.

This book has some good points where emotion is very tense. The reader helps portray the tension between both characters and it shows well with the progression of the story.

This story is very well-crafted. It's pretty obvious the writer takes care in writing to make the reader well-versed in it. There are small grammar problems but they don't affect the incredible writing you'll go through reading.

The premise of the book makes you wonder what’ll happen to Tom as it goes on. The writing is beey descriptive and that’s great choice of writing and the dialogue is also great. Sometimes the wrIter can tell and not show but that doesn’t happen often and they’ll hopefully fix that.

This book has everything you need. Its very comedic but it also action-packed with the main character going through troubles to level up as a goblin. It can be a bit more descriptive but that doesn’t affect the great writing.

The dialogue between the characters feels good and the characters are also well-crafted. The description could use some work though as there aren't many of them.

The dialogue that was written really does help portray the tense yet modern environment you're presenting. The characters are realistic but are very engaging to read the situations they get in. One thing you can do better is expand on the punctuation you're using.

Zorca is a very powerful protagonist. The novel is very descriptive of situations and is able to portray the tension of the moments. It would be great if you made more description of the setting and the character appearance.

The premise of the plot is very unique and can be great. Of course, it takes more than good a good plot but also great writing and description. This has that with the good vocabulary used to back up the plot. The only criticism I have is that more varying punctuation can be used.

The relationship between Yelena and Felix is very complex and well-written. It's obvious they both have respect for each other and it's going to be great to see how their relationship changes.

The main character is very goofy which helps set up very comedic situations. The plot is starting up well and will probably get funnier as they go on. The only problem is you can sometimes make the jokes a little too complicated so avoid doing that a little but keep writing!

The premise of the plot really intrigues me and the description of it really encapsulates what you're trying to portray and the pacing could be a problem but to me it's fine.